I'm so happy for Calen and Darcy getting their happy ending! I'm impressed with Calen's difficult decision to leave everything behind and start over. I love their cute new little house.
Also, this picture: http://i.imgur.com/ISlaA3W.jpg Really got me! Opal's face is just so *sad* And the door between them... yeah, great picture!
I didn't even recognize Liam at first... he got big! I hope they can reconcile their differences one day in the future <3 Oh, and Duncan too... aw man :/ that made me sad. He shouldn't blame Calen though really. But I get why he does. Hm. :(
The genetic occult creation stuff was crazy :O i am kinda hoping even though Calen wanted to get away from it all that Renee here will go back and try to fix this crazy situation! Healing, after all, eh?
And I don't think you should consider this your weakest plot! I really enjoyed it a lot <3 I think above all Calen struggled to bring purity into the world (a very impure place). I liked the way purity tied into the Dana/Darcy romance conflict. And their sweet little house, with the painting and the flowers and the bright colors... perfect, I'd say!
Above all just so excited to see a chapter from you - I hope you had a lot of fun with Carys! I wish I could meet up with you guys too hahah. But even from afar you are inspiring me to work on my story too :D Great chapter <3
YES TALES :D I'm glad you were excited to read it :D I was glad to finally post it XD
I figured it was the best and most 'pure' way to finish things...even if they have a child out of wedlock. DETAILS. Who needs um?
I may have overused that 'different wall' shot, but it's still really cool so I'll keep doing it.
He did! I figured at 13 I could age him up, I wanted to see his genes, and he's actually surprisingly cute :3 They will both be seen again :D
Healing......creepy experiments....now why would you draw that conclusion? ;)
I wish you could have met up with us too, you actually come up a lot during our talks. We'll have to chat on Skype again soon, maybe the 3 of us can even 3 way talk over it sometime :)
Was so excited to read this chapter <3
I'm so happy for Calen and Darcy getting their happy ending! I'm impressed with Calen's difficult decision to leave everything behind and start over. I love their cute new little house.
Also, this picture: http://i.imgur.com/ISlaA3W.jpg
Really got me! Opal's face is just so *sad*
And the door between them... yeah, great picture!
I didn't even recognize Liam at first... he got big! I hope they can reconcile their differences one day in the future <3 Oh, and Duncan too... aw man :/ that made me sad. He shouldn't blame Calen though really. But I get why he does. Hm. :(
The genetic occult creation stuff was crazy :O i am kinda hoping even though Calen wanted to get away from it all that Renee here will go back and try to fix this crazy situation! Healing, after all, eh?
And I don't think you should consider this your weakest plot! I really enjoyed it a lot <3 I think above all Calen struggled to bring purity into the world (a very impure place). I liked the way purity tied into the Dana/Darcy romance conflict. And their sweet little house, with the painting and the flowers and the bright colors... perfect, I'd say!
Above all just so excited to see a chapter from you - I hope you had a lot of fun with Carys! I wish I could meet up with you guys too hahah. But even from afar you are inspiring me to work on my story too :D
Great chapter <3
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I figured it was the best and most 'pure' way to finish things...even if they have a child out of wedlock. DETAILS. Who needs um?
I may have overused that 'different wall' shot, but it's still really cool so I'll keep doing it.
He did! I figured at 13 I could age him up, I wanted to see his genes, and he's actually surprisingly cute :3 They will both be seen again :D
Healing......creepy experiments....now why would you draw that conclusion? ;)
I wish you could have met up with us too, you actually come up a lot during our talks. We'll have to chat on Skype again soon, maybe the 3 of us can even 3 way talk over it sometime :)
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