FIC: "Almost Perfect" by lunalovepotter

Apr 19, 2010 20:02

To: snarkysweetness

Title: Almost Perfect
Author/Artist: lunalovepotter
Pairing: Harry/Ginny
Rating: NC-17 (to be safe)
Word Count: 2305
Summary: Harry's life was just about perfect, except for one little thing.

Author/Artist's Notes: The request was for a story involving Harry or Ginny wanting something from the other but being afraid to ask for it. I wish I could have fit ( Read more... )

fic, fest:keeping secrets, :author: lunalovepotter

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Comments 15

almond_joyz April 20 2010, 02:07:42 UTC
YAY!! I love seeing the finished products. You do such a great job creating intimacy in the little moments and it just pulls at my heart to see Harry want to have a little girl.

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lunalovepotter April 24 2010, 17:21:08 UTC
Aw, thank you so much for your comments - it always means a lot coming from you. I appreciate your help with everything, too. :)

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flyingcarpet April 20 2010, 03:13:23 UTC
Sexy and super, super sweet! I love the way you set this up, so that they are both keeping a secret... and yet they line up so perfectly. :)

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lunalovepotter April 24 2010, 17:22:29 UTC
Thanks so much! The whole thing with Ginny already being pregnant came as kind of an afterthought, but I'm happy with how it worked out. :)

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lunalovepotter April 24 2010, 17:23:44 UTC
You're very welcome. I'm so glad you liked it! :)

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stmargarets April 20 2010, 12:01:13 UTC
Oh, Harry's longing was perfectly conveyed. Very sweet.

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lunalovepotter April 24 2010, 17:24:08 UTC
Thanks very much!

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lyras April 21 2010, 16:21:42 UTC
Oh, lovely revelation at the end. :) It's a beautiful way to tie things together, particularly since we know the outcome of that pregnancy!

I also really enjoyed the "shall we, shan't we, do we have time for this?" in the rest of the fic - very realistic. :)

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lunalovepotter April 24 2010, 17:25:07 UTC
Thank you! I've always found Harry's longing to be a father very endearing, and I really enjoy writing fics relating to that. :)

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