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taki1388

[One Shot] Visiting Hours

Jun 01, 2011 16:27

Visiting Hours
Fandom: SS501
Genre: Romance
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Jung Min x Kyu Jong
Summary: Jung Min was in the hospital because of fatigue and Kyu Jong wanted to do a little cheering up.
Disclaimer: Even if I wished that I own them, I don't. All I have is love <3.
A/N:Thank you rawrstarrr for helping me to iron out somethings <3

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one shot, ss501, romance, jung min x kyu jong

Comments 16

sab08 June 1 2011, 09:14:44 UTC

eomma!!!!!!!!!!1
where are you? TT^TT

i've read it and OMG!!!
i didn't know that pjm would be paired up with kyu.. i though he's paired up with maknae.. this is something new. ^^
♥♥♥♥♥
amazing! lol at the other three.. :)

taki1388 June 1 2011, 11:58:16 UTC

sorry internet is wonky!~
I'm glad you liked it <3
It all started with the "Thank You for Waking Us Up" Episode where Kyu Jong was the only one who knew that Jung Min wanted to be pulled up. So there was a spark between them... kukuku~
Thanks for the comment I'm still getting the hang on LJ though XDDDDD

sab08 June 1 2011, 14:33:11 UTC

oohh.. i remember that scene.. anung episode nga yun? XD

spark!! lol..
will you write leader x otter for me? pretty pretty please with cherries on top?

go explore lj eomma! XDDD
i'm still getting the hang of it too..

rawrstarrr June 2 2011, 17:57:25 UTC

WOW! This is interesting, though I wouldn't really call this smut and rated an R. :3 with only sexual implications and lacking the details of the REAL THING, this should only be PG-13 or PG-14 since there was a mention of taking clothes off.

I'm saying this in comparison to all the other fics posted here. Wrong genre and rating, in my opinion. :P

I love KyuMin though... :3

And lol-ed much at the other three, but I have to correct... Hyun Joong shouldn't be calling Kyu Jong "hyung" because he's the eldest? I think you got that part wrong.

Anyway, that's about it. KEEP WRITING.

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And I couldn't help but notice......... but are you Filipino too? :3 Coz I am. LOL. ^^ see you around!

taki1388 June 5 2011, 08:06:26 UTC

Hi!~ Glad that you liked it!!!! <3

I really had problems rating this and looking for the right genre... I don't really write with those in mind off the bat so I'm not quite sure.

Oh my goodness you're right! I mixed up the names!!! thanks for that!!! :kicks self:

I really really appreciated your constructive critique!!!! Super thank you :D

Yes I am a Filipino :D sure sure see you around :D

rawrstarrr June 5 2011, 10:34:54 UTC

I'm glad I helped in a way and I hope you weren't offended! :3
Anyway, yeah... KEEP WRITING. I think I'm the only Filipina writer in Gyonggo for a while. So I'm happy to see a kababayan here. So yeah~ ^^

taki1388 June 7 2011, 12:16:30 UTC

no not at all!~ I was really happy you pointed that out I was soooooo thankful!!!! I realized that i was momentarily confused during the time i was writing the last part...

Weeeeeee!!! am glad that we met :D

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hyunaepark June 3 2011, 00:32:36 UTC

LOL~ very cute c:

purple501 June 3 2011, 07:03:59 UTC

awww my ss501 otp~
<3

taki1388 June 5 2011, 08:31:44 UTC

Thanks for commenting :D glad you liked it :D

rawrstarrr June 5 2011, 10:36:51 UTC

I see you. :3

taki1388 June 7 2011, 12:40:09 UTC

:D glad you did :3
weeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!! <3

freezing_heart June 28 2011, 18:43:02 UTC

KyuMin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!My OTP!!!
Sexy Kyu and playing-angry Min~ They're both so needy and demanding XD
And the guys outside the hospital room...oh, lol!XD
They should have listened to Hyung Joon haha But the image of Saeng and Hyun with their ears pressed against the door was quite amusing~
Thanks for writing it! ^.^

taki1388 July 3 2011, 23:21:39 UTC

Thanks for the comment!
I'm so happy that you liked it :)