Undercover Part 4/4

[takhallus]

Gabriel stared at the harsh grey building from the guts of a wrecked ferryboat on the waterfront of Lake Champlain. The Roberts Dockyard wasn’t your typical dockyard at all, just home to a disused ferry station, but easily unnoticed from the far shore of the lake. There was no sign of movement and his racing adrenaline was sending his abilities

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[levitatethis]

The final chapter! What am I supposed to do now with this story finished?

I really dig how you've wrapped it all up and the real closeness that you've established through all the chapters to lead to this one. I like how much pretense has been set aside and you them trying to be together, as honestly as possible. Gabriel undressing Mohinder (and Mohinder wanting to roll up against him but too tired and having to settle for what he can get) is very hot :-)

And then the wake up blow job? Hello, indeed!

My favourite part though (besides the cuteness of Bennet feeling like a father chaperoning the two of them being all flirty in the back of the car) is that Gabriel only believes that Mohinder's feelings are genuine when Mohinder says he finds Gabriel irritating. If that's not them I don't know what is.

Great story!

[takhallus]

Wake up blowjobs FTW lol

Glad you like, I had to have Mohinder snapping and telling him to shut up with his insecurities XD

[bloody_beary]

Wonderful and funny ending! I love how Peter is oblivious to it all, it is SO HIM!! Love this little series!! Keep on writing mylar please!! We have enough angst in our mylar and you are like a sugar treat we love to munch on when we get tired of fast food. There aren't many happy endings in mylar.

[takhallus]

Aw! Thankyou! I like being a sugar treat lol

This is the end of this story but I have an AU coming up which will give you toothache XD

Hooooly shit!

[abordantoinette]

i loved loved loved this story.

the way sylar killed that first guard and silenty sunk him in the lake was badass.

this is so well written. it might sound crazy, but some of this reminded me of gabriel garcia marquez, especially In Evil Hour, which i love. (it was this paragraph that reminded me: Marridas turned around. He wasn’t an imposing man, his white hair and tanned skin made him look like the type of friendly grandfather you might see sunning himself on a Florida porch, but his eyes were dark and expressionless, and he didn’t flinch at the display of violence as the guard bled out over the floor of the abandoned building.).

and these two are too adorable! love the ending.
great job!

Re: Hooooly shit!

[takhallus]

Wow, Gabriel Garcia Marquez, that's quite a big compliment! LOL

Thanks so much for taking the time to comment, glad you liked it x

[speccygeekgrrl]

Oh, I have been looking forward to this part so eagerly, and it's perfect!

Question: have you mentioned Lake Champlain before? because I used to live right next to it and as soon as I saw the name I went "OHHHH THAT'S WHERE THEY ARE" xD

Aw, Gabriel being all 'nooo it's drugs' and Mohinder all 'don't be stupid, DO ME' xD And Mohinder telling him all the ways he's annoying while Gabriel gets him off! that was wonderful!

The last few lines KILLED ME DEAD!

♥!!

[moorishflower]

The image of Noah as a disapproving chaperone made me giggle. :D This whole adventure has been gorgeously funny and hot and thrilling and I adored every second of it. <3

[takhallus]

No, I made it Lake Champlain because I said in the last chapter that Mohinder would be at the dockyard, but then I forgot they were in Vermont where apparently there aren't any dockyards! So I made it a ferry station LOL. Bad research XD

[original_tinks]

i'm so sad to see this end but looking forward to the next fluffy fic you promise =D

thank you!!!

[takhallus]

Thankyou! Love your icon by the way!

[original_tinks]

remind me to come back and ste-I mean, acquire...err, borrow! yours =P