Listening to the dulcet tones of Taylor Swift for half an hour while being on hold with my doctors office has given me the need to post this now. Also MY BIRTHDAY IS THIS WEEK, so what better way to celebrate?!
Another groan and his palm smacks against the brick beside her head and makes her jump. The Doctor pulls away and turns, wiping a hand, a shaking hand, over his face and his head shakes too. "I'm sorry, Rose. I just." He sighs, looks at her. "There's no excuse I'm just. Still new and everything is sensory overload and just touching you, even your hair." He's pressed against her again, then. "It's so soft and fuck, Rose. I." He closes his eyes, licks his lips and she whimpers, silently. "I have to say it, Rose. I want to fuck you right here, right now." When he opens his eyes again, they're somehow darker than before. Almost black. They travel over her full, kissed out lips and to her own eyes, which she figures at pretty clouded and hard to read beyond her half-closed lids. "I know you're still unsure but, --" And then something else that sounds like a growl, and she almost laughs, it's so unexpected.
"My whole body is singing, it's burning. My skin is just, it's on fire and it's itchy and it's just, just, just, you. It's you, with your soft hair and your lips and your, your biting me and you little bloody tease, just."
She gasps, he's molded his body to hers and he's harder than before and he presses, just there, with her leg open and --
"Tell me."
He meets her eye, teeth gritted together and he curls his hands into fists against the wall on either side of her head.
"It's everything at once, Rose. I want to hold your hand, and then I want to suck your fingers and feel them inside my mouth and taste, taste the salt from your skin and follow it with my tongue and your skin. I remember those freckles on your thigh and I want to bite them, and make you moan and pant and beg me to lick you and suck you right there." Another press and they both groan, this time. "God, I can remember. How you taste so sweet and thick right before you come and your nails scraping at my scalp, pulling at my hair, and I want to pull your hair and push open your legs and wrap them around my waist and feel you, feel you Rose just, just, against me. Sweaty and skin, your skin just bare and pressed to me and I want to fuck you hard. I want to fuck you so hard I can't think about anything else. I, I, I, just, Rose, you, so wet around me and I know, I know, I'm scaring you but--"
She's kissing him then, panting hot and cold between their mouths and she's so turned on her eyes are watering and she can feel her knickers soaked beneath her jeans and he breathes her in, she swears it. She kisses her way across his jaw, down his neck and up again to his ear and she bites, and he swears, picks her up and wraps her legs around his waist and they move, just so and it's not enough but it's close. "Tell me." Whimpers against his ear, squeezes her legs around him even tighter.
OMG LJ, FINE. pt. 3takethewordsMay 6 2010, 07:50:14 UTC
"Thought about you last night, in the TARDIS, while you were sleeping up in your bedroom. I was worried, hoped you were alright but I couldn't stop, couldn't stop thinking about just the touch of your hand in mine. Wanted you to use your hands on me, remembered how you did, and your mouth. Bloody hell, your mouth, Rose. So hot and, and, and wet, and your eyes, the way you look up at me. I'm sorry, I'm sorry I changed but I, Rose, you know I --"
But he hadn't changed, not really. His laugh was lighter and his frame was thinner and his eyes were darker but he was still the same man who'd watched the world explode into a million pieces and then taken her out for chips after. Who'd let her save her father and let her pretend she didn't want him and bring daft blokes on board and who'd kissed her and touched her, who'd made her come and who'd died for her. She's the one who's changed. Since the moment he took her hand she'd never been the same and the whole world, the whole universe, now looked different in her eyes.
There's just enough friction between them to get her there. Her stomach tenses and her fingers dig into the straining muscles of his shoulders and she shivers, not from the cold but from the brilliant heat that spreads through her body from her core. Gasping against his mouth and opening her eyes to see him staring back at her, brilliant and desperate, hips moving harder and she sucks his bottom lip into her mouth one last time. "Doctor, my Doctor."
He groans, loud and long into her neck and comes in his trousers, hands gripping her bottom hard and hips jumping between her thighs. He keeps moving until he can't hold her up anymore and she drops her feet to the ground, gasping hot breath into the air.
He licks his lips and his eyes flutter open to find her grinning at him. "So I'm still the Doctor, then."
Re: OMG LJ, FINE. pt. 3anon_aspasiaMay 6 2010, 11:28:50 UTC
...wow. The repeated use of "Tell me," the superhot Ten sexbabble, the emotional overtones: that was phenomenal, and one of the sexiest things I've read in a while.
Will you be posting this in one piece anywhere? I ask purely because I need to save this one; if it will be archived on LJ, it's definitely earned my "oh my holy hell smut" tag. Damn.
Re: OMG LJ, FINE. pt. 3lovingthecubsMay 7 2010, 00:22:39 UTC
She's the one who's changed. Since the moment he took her hand she'd never been the same and the whole world, the whole universe, now looked different in her eyes.
This whole thing is so hot, so amazing. But this. AND THAT ENDING..!
IF YOU EVER THINK SOMETHING MIGHT BE TOO PORNY AGAIN, SEND YOURSELF TO YOUR ROOM.mylittlepwnyMay 8 2010, 00:53:52 UTC
"It's everything at once, Rose. I want to hold your hand, and then I want to suck your fingers and feel them inside my mouth and taste, taste the salt from your skin and follow it with my tongue and your skin. I remember those freckles on your thigh and I want to bite them, and make you moan and pant and beg me to lick you and suck you right there." Another press and they both groan, this time. "God, I can remember. How you taste so sweet and thick right before you come and your nails scraping at my scalp, pulling at my hair, and I want to pull your hair and push open your legs and wrap them around my waist and feel you, feel you Rose just, just, against me. Sweaty and skin, your skin just bare and pressed to me and I want to fuck you hard. I want to fuck you so hard I can't think about anything else. I, I, I, just, Rose, you, so wet around me and I know, I know, I'm scaring you but--"
AND THEN I CAME.
omg kat. omg. i can't even capitalize this is so amazing. omg.
He licks his lips and his eyes flutter open to find her grinning at him. "So I'm still the Doctor, then."
"Mmmm, no arguments from me." She grins wider.
jsldkfmjsdkf PERFECT. WHAT. I hope you weren't expecting anything even close to coherent from me after this, because let me tell you what, I will not be able to articulate basic sentences for at least a week. AT LEAST. Fuck.
"My whole body is singing, it's burning. My skin is just, it's on fire and it's itchy and it's just, just, just, you. It's you, with your soft hair and your lips and your, your biting me and you little bloody tease, just."
She gasps, he's molded his body to hers and he's harder than before and he presses, just there, with her leg open and --
"Tell me."
He meets her eye, teeth gritted together and he curls his hands into fists against the wall on either side of her head.
"It's everything at once, Rose. I want to hold your hand, and then I want to suck your fingers and feel them inside my mouth and taste, taste the salt from your skin and follow it with my tongue and your skin. I remember those freckles on your thigh and I want to bite them, and make you moan and pant and beg me to lick you and suck you right there." Another press and they both groan, this time. "God, I can remember. How you taste so sweet and thick right before you come and your nails scraping at my scalp, pulling at my hair, and I want to pull your hair and push open your legs and wrap them around my waist and feel you, feel you Rose just, just, against me. Sweaty and skin, your skin just bare and pressed to me and I want to fuck you hard. I want to fuck you so hard I can't think about anything else. I, I, I, just, Rose, you, so wet around me and I know, I know, I'm scaring you but--"
She's kissing him then, panting hot and cold between their mouths and she's so turned on her eyes are watering and she can feel her knickers soaked beneath her jeans and he breathes her in, she swears it. She kisses her way across his jaw, down his neck and up again to his ear and she bites, and he swears, picks her up and wraps her legs around his waist and they move, just so and it's not enough but it's close. "Tell me." Whimpers against his ear, squeezes her legs around him even tighter.
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But he hadn't changed, not really. His laugh was lighter and his frame was thinner and his eyes were darker but he was still the same man who'd watched the world explode into a million pieces and then taken her out for chips after. Who'd let her save her father and let her pretend she didn't want him and bring daft blokes on board and who'd kissed her and touched her, who'd made her come and who'd died for her. She's the one who's changed. Since the moment he took her hand she'd never been the same and the whole world, the whole universe, now looked different in her eyes.
There's just enough friction between them to get her there. Her stomach tenses and her fingers dig into the straining muscles of his shoulders and she shivers, not from the cold but from the brilliant heat that spreads through her body from her core. Gasping against his mouth and opening her eyes to see him staring back at her, brilliant and desperate, hips moving harder and she sucks his bottom lip into her mouth one last time. "Doctor, my Doctor."
He groans, loud and long into her neck and comes in his trousers, hands gripping her bottom hard and hips jumping between her thighs. He keeps moving until he can't hold her up anymore and she drops her feet to the ground, gasping hot breath into the air.
He licks his lips and his eyes flutter open to find her grinning at him. "So I'm still the Doctor, then."
"Mmmm, no arguments from me." She grins wider.
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Will you be posting this in one piece anywhere? I ask purely because I need to save this one; if it will be archived on LJ, it's definitely earned my "oh my holy hell smut" tag. Damn.
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"Tell me."
*dies*
You are marvelous.
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he was still the same man who'd watched the world explode into a million pieces and then taken her out for chips after
I don't know why, but this line in particular was just so brilliantly perfect. Oh, them.
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YES. It's smut but it's also *so much more than smut.* I approve! Sexy *and* meaningful character beats. Can't ask for more than that.
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This whole thing is so hot, so amazing. But this. AND THAT ENDING..!
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"It's everything at once, Rose. I want to hold your hand, and then I want to suck your fingers and feel them inside my mouth and taste, taste the salt from your skin and follow it with my tongue and your skin. I remember those freckles on your thigh and I want to bite them, and make you moan and pant and beg me to lick you and suck you right there." Another press and they both groan, this time. "God, I can remember. How you taste so sweet and thick right before you come and your nails scraping at my scalp, pulling at my hair, and I want to pull your hair and push open your legs and wrap them around my waist and feel you, feel you Rose just, just, against me. Sweaty and skin, your skin just bare and pressed to me and I want to fuck you hard. I want to fuck you so hard I can't think about anything else. I, I, I, just, Rose, you, so wet around me and I know, I know, I'm scaring you but--"
AND THEN I CAME.
omg kat. omg. i can't even capitalize this is so amazing. omg.
He licks his lips and his eyes flutter open to find her grinning at him. "So I'm still the Doctor, then."
"Mmmm, no arguments from me." She grins wider.
jsldkfmjsdkf PERFECT. WHAT. I hope you weren't expecting anything even close to coherent from me after this, because let me tell you what, I will not be able to articulate basic sentences for at least a week. AT LEAST. Fuck.
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My.
God.
This is brilliant. And perfect. And unbelievably hot.
*wanders away in a daze*
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