She is holding an apple; the color spreads from her hands, the round red tips of her fingers, the orange glow of her wrists in the console light, smooth yellow-white skin soft at the insides of her elbows. She is holding an apple and she is connected, all of it is. The round green earth and the circles of her kneecaps, the apple and the seeds and the dark centers of her eyes and she bites down, hard, and the flesh of the fruit splits.
His pulse jumps like a subwoofer, the sudden spurt of time on a broken clock. He flushes the color of cherries, or doesn't, because she can't see him anyway, not under the grates. He strips a wire more brutally than anybody has to.
"What ?" she asks. The juice runs down her chin. She licks the trails with a pink tongue. He rolls his eyes to keep from opening his mouth, because nothing good will come of that"D'you know," he says idly, after a long minute spent trying to mentally deconstruct her nutritious breakfast, "on some planets you'd have to eat that with a knife and fork." She frowns. "With gloves
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So it's an all around Thing for you, then. This writing the Doctor just exactly how he really is, no matter whether it's Nine or Ten or any decimal version in between and I totally knew that already, thanks to that one ficlet you wrote that time, but still I am INORDINATELY PLEASED, because this, okay, thisthisthis, has my pulse pounding and my head nodding and his violent wire stripping as a way to try to keep calm and carry on and not let Rose see how fantastically sexy he finds the simplest of her actions is NINE ALL OVER OMG, just, all over
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...his violent wire stripping as a way to try to keep calm and carry on LOL FOREVER, YES. Also, BRAIN TWINS. I swear I did not use mystical spy powers to view your apple. I also did not climb inside your brain for the Tesco's thing OR DID I.
UM, either I've never read your Nine fic before or I'd forgotten how AMAZING YOU ARE AT WRITING HIM. And, AND you manage to differentiate the characterization between s1 Rose and s2 Rose. ASDFJL;KV.
Fantastic. SO fantastic and sensual and it's just got all the smoldering Nine/Rose sexiness wrapped up in a nice little bundle. ♥ ♥
Who knew eating an apple could be so sexy? And now, they're off to the market. :) Doctor, don't forget the strawberries and the chocolate. *wicked grin*
1. a blush; rosy glow
2. a sudden rise of emotion or excitement
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His pulse jumps like a subwoofer, the sudden spurt of time on a broken clock. He flushes the color of cherries, or doesn't, because she can't see him anyway, not under the grates. He strips a wire more brutally than anybody has to.
"What ?" she asks. The juice runs down her chin. She licks the trails with a pink tongue. He rolls his eyes to keep from opening his mouth, because nothing good will come of that"D'you know," he says idly, after a long minute spent trying to mentally deconstruct her nutritious breakfast, "on some planets you'd have to eat that with a knife and fork." She frowns. "With gloves ( ... )
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Omg, so amazing. So evocative, I overuse that word, but it's true.
LOVE, and Melissa will freak no doubt. lol
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This writing the Doctor just exactly how he really is, no matter whether it's Nine or Ten or any decimal version in between and I totally knew that already, thanks to that one ficlet you wrote that time, but still I am INORDINATELY PLEASED, because this, okay, thisthisthis, has my pulse pounding and my head nodding and his violent wire stripping as a way to try to keep calm and carry on and not let Rose see how fantastically sexy he finds the simplest of her actions is NINE ALL OVER OMG, just, all over ( ... )
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...his violent wire stripping as a way to try to keep calm and carry on LOL FOREVER, YES. Also, BRAIN TWINS. I swear I did not use mystical spy powers to view your apple. I also did not climb inside your brain for the Tesco's thing OR DID I.
I love you too, babes.
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Fantastic. SO fantastic and sensual and it's just got all the smoldering Nine/Rose sexiness wrapped up in a nice little bundle. ♥ ♥
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Now we know why he was carrying a banana in his pocket in The Doctor Dances. ;)
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