Comments | takethesky87: Heroes fic: Autumn Eyes

takethesky87

Heroes fic: Autumn Eyes

Aug 30, 2007 21:17

Title: Autumn Eyes
Characters: Peter/Mohinder
Word Count: 1,429
Rating: PG
Spoilers: through 1.19, ".07%".
Summary: Mohinder thought he had lost Peter before he ever really got to know him.
Disclaimer: I don’t own Mohinder, or Peter, or any of the other characters from Heroes. Darn.

( Peter's eyes had left an indelible impression on him. )

fic: heroes: mohinder/peter, fic: *all, fic: heroes

Comments 23

tracker_lucifer August 31 2007, 03:11:57 UTC

First off... I love your header/banner... Just too unbearably cute. *cough* anyway, the fic is darling and finally someone taken a whack at that scene. *gives claps and cookies*

takethesky87 August 31 2007, 03:36:21 UTC

Thanks! I adore the colors in the graffiti behind Milo and wanted to incorporate it into my LJ somehow. And, you know, Milo is hot in it. :)

*gobbles cookies* Thank you so much! This is my first time writing slash, so I'm a little apprehensive. But your cookies make things better. :)

tracker_lucifer August 31 2007, 04:13:27 UTC

For ya first slash, it's rather cute. Nice job. :3

takethesky87 August 31 2007, 04:21:48 UTC

Thaaaankies. :D

technosage August 31 2007, 03:45:28 UTC

This is lovely. Your prose is indelible, your characterizations excellent. I'm really delighted to see someone new writing Mohinder/Peter with the passion they deserve.

Really a lovely fic.

technosage August 31 2007, 03:58:44 UTC

Also, recced here.

takethesky87 August 31 2007, 04:04:00 UTC

*squeeee* I'm so happy you liked it ... and thank you SO MUCH for recc'ing me. Seriously, that's one of the best compliments I could receive. :D

technosage August 31 2007, 04:07:17 UTC

*grin* I love the pairing, I love how you wrote them, what's not to like? *hugs and pets* Well done!

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neoreulwonhae August 31 2007, 03:46:47 UTC

Ah! *squee* Your imagery is amazing! I could see the scenes! I love it when writers do that... XD

Basically, amazing. The story was awesome, and the sensory words were asdklgjslhk. Ah! *squees again* Totally putting this in memories. :D

takethesky87 August 31 2007, 04:04:48 UTC

Hooraaaayy, thank you so much! *grin* I'm so glad to hear you liked it so much. :D

littlewings04 August 31 2007, 05:05:12 UTC

This is so elegant and the descriptors hit so hard and with such finesse. You use parallel structure so deftly throughout, it's really your strength. Excellent, excellent little gem of a piece, fantastically evocative and just a real stand-out.

takethesky87 August 31 2007, 05:21:54 UTC

Thank you so so much. I'm glad the parallel structures hit home for you, I do like those a lot. :P

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takethesky87 August 31 2007, 05:37:01 UTC

Thank you for sharing.

Thank you for reading! :D