Here it is, 24 hours late, with my sincere apologies for tardiness.
Title: We'll Roll Down Interstate 94
Author:
chicklet_girlSummary: Look, planning a road trip for 13 people is just complicated, all right?
Rating: PG
Words: 2225
Spoilers: For O11 and O12
Warnings: There's a mention of creamed spinach.
Recipient:
luzdeestrellasNotes: Luz, I'm so sorry, but this turned
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Whew! *g* That feels great to know.
I love the pretty Tight Linus pov, especially because you still manage all these details -- how they all spend their time, Tess and Isabel not getting on, Livingston getting sick -- so it really does feel like an ensemble.
I don't know why, but Linus is the character easiest for me to get a handle on; maybe it's because he spends so much of the movies observing what's going on, and that's how I tend to operate in groups. And that led into thinking about the dynamics of this group, and I found that fascinating, like who would hang out with whom and what they would do while they were in Chicago, waiting to leave for the job. (I didn't mention it in the story, but Saul ended up going to the track with Turk, and was surprised to find that Turk kind of knows what he's talking about re: horses.)
And the closeness between them all really comes through, as well.
Thanks! I love that the reason they work so well together is that closeness, because everyone in the group has known Danny and/or Rusty for years.
Really, your Linus all through this is the cutest thing ever.
Hee! He's so adorably *worried* all of the time. Also, he's able to calculate *in his head* the interest on the $1 million he spent from the Benedict job, which is v.v. impressive, in my book. *g*
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