Contrapasso Part 9

[takadainmate]

Title: Contrapasso

Full warnings, summary and notes at Part 0.

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Comments

[mulder200]

Wow! What a rush! When I read the snippet you posted, I had no idea it would turn into this. Talk about a wild and crazy ride.

Just like Dean, I didn't know what the fuck was going on but when Cas and Sam were both keeping secrets and the demons, I just knew that they had landed back in Hell and I was right. Damn!

And I agree with Dean that the whole thing between Michael and Lucifer was pointless and a waste. Still, they got they deserved.

But best off all, Sam and Dean and Cas have each other and that's all that matters.

[takadainmate]

I am seriously impressed with your ability to read all that so fast!

I'm glad you enjoyed this though. I was trying to keep the main jist of the plot top-secret for the reason that I wanted readers to work it out for themselves, or else realise when Dean did. Writing the summary was a nightmare because of this!

I'll admit, I'm slightly addicted to writing Team Free Will fic.

Anyway, thanks for commenting!

[xx_ibitsu_xx]

I'm speechless.
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This was just so utterly fantastic, and all I want is to see this become the legit story for this season >.>;

[takadainmate]

I'm very glad you liked it! I think I prefer my version to what we've seen so far of this season too... ;_;

[karaq]

Holy shit. I'm completely speechless with awe!
I've aæways wished for a SPN fic based on Dante, but this one FAR surpassed my expectations.
That was on fantastic ride! Thank you for taking us on this journey. :)

~KaraQ

[takadainmate]

My pleasure! Sort of. More like my pain, maybe. XD Still, it was a great (and epic) writing experience, and I am very glad it's been so well recieved! I love Dante, so much that I dragged my mum to go and see his house in Florence last year so I could fangirl him, and was very glad to do justice to his amazing world.

[slinkymilinky]

Awesome fic, it felt pretty 'Silent Hill' in atmosphere to me -a creepy and slow decent into chaos. I always enjoy your writing, and this fic makes me wanna go do loads of drawing - your description of the environment slowly pulling apart at the seams - the dilapidation of the buildings, the fires, the frigidity, it was all so clear and beautifully paced. I LUFFED IT! (I also loved that Cas kept bitching about his trench-coat. I hope that Dean bought him a new one when they finally got out)

Thanks for sharing.

Slink. <3

[takadainmate]

I don't know Silent Hill, so I'll have to take your word for it. XD

I had the idea that the image of the "town" would fall apart, the deeper into hell you got. Things would become more disordered and less human, so I'm glad this worked.

And yes, I adore the trench coat and I am positive the first thing Dean will do is to get Cas a new one!

Thank you for your very kind comments!

[anirasjourn]

That was amzing such a ride, I hope it wasnt obvious they were in hell because I didnt guess it at all until it was stated. I love the relationship between all three of them.

[takadainmate]

It was and it wasn't. I left clues, but if you're not familiar with Dante you probably wouldn't recognise them. In initial feedback, some people caught it and some didn't.

I'm glad you enjoyed it. I do feel there should be more TFW adventure/case fic in this fandom!