i finished spell checking the second part..
and whoever reads this im still haveing a block about the whole title thingy...
i think i might start a writing journal..im off to make it..
"Why... why?" he asked gently. Christine coughed harder then before, her face bright red. "I just want to know why...” She reached out to the nightstand for the glass of water, and drank the water trying to stop the coughs. Her coughs didnt subside as she choked on her water.
"Raoul." she stopped to retain normal breathing "Raoul let me continue, oh Raoul please before I leave...". Raoul looked at her with his gentle eyes and nodded while tears trickled down his cheeks "Yes Christine, you may continue"
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(Christine) After I had returned from the grave I went to the hotel I was staying at. I paced inside the room thinking of what I should do...go see the man I longed for…or stay in my room. My mind raced like a fast horse…trotting down a path but curious to go around the corners.
After much time of walking in circles, I sat down at my vanity table looking at my reflection.
I saw a woman. I woman I had not seen in such a long time Raoul. I hadn’t seen her since that night of the burning. She was fragile and pale...she was torn between what to do. Dark black circles lay beneath her brown eyes. Her long brown hair tied up in a bun reveled her porcelain white forehead.
She was afraid what to do.
I touched the face and wiped away the tears running down her cheek. This woman needed change..before she permanently became that woman. I looked at the clock and it read seven thirty. I reached for the draw and took out the parchment paper and read the address.
I picked up my satin cloak and opened the door and sighed and remembering what Erik said 'I’m laughing, because you are mad at the person you have been wanting and wishing for’. The hesitated for a minute but then shook it off and closed the door.
I worried about what would happen. But what I didn’t know is that night would change my life forever...
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To be continued...