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FIC: HP: Undone (Harry/Ron)

Oct 14, 2007 19:48

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fic: hp, fic: slash, pairing: harry/ron, fic, character: ron, drabble, harryron100, character: harry

Comments 9

freakish_ct October 17 2007, 07:14:45 UTC

Ooohhh... this reminds me of that Duran Duran song called "Come Undone", I think. Oooohhhh...

tailoredshirt October 17 2007, 18:06:44 UTC

Haha! I should know that one, but the melody's not coming to me straight away. I'll have to find it and remind myself...

iamshadow October 17 2007, 08:00:04 UTC

Control can be such an issue for people who've had turbulent lives. The image of Harry struggling against loss of control of his own body even during consensual sex is a powerful and very believable one.

Excellent work.

tailoredshirt October 17 2007, 18:08:16 UTC

Thank you. That was exactly what I had in mind when I was writing this.

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tailoredshirt October 17 2007, 18:10:23 UTC

Thank you. You and iamshadow have said it much better than I did. But I imagine that no matter how much trust he places in Ron, he might always struggle a bit. But hopefully Ron will always be there to help him. :)

zeppelinakias October 17 2007, 16:31:00 UTC

Oh, really moving...And I really liked the 1st person, in which Harry is talking...I love it!

tailoredshirt October 17 2007, 18:11:16 UTC

Thank you. I've been using first person a lot lately, but I'm not really sure why. It just seems to fit, I guess. :)

for_a_fantasy October 17 2007, 21:11:45 UTC

Oh that was hott. Brilliant.

tailoredshirt October 18 2007, 02:20:31 UTC

Thank you. :) I'm glad you liked it.