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tahirire

Fic: I Tell You

May 18, 2010 00:15

It was one of those prairie storms, you know the kind, the kind that just pops up out of nowhere? Anyway, it was hot that night. Even the wind was hot, and we were out in the field when it picked up, and there wasn’t really any time to run for the car, so we dove into the storm cellar out back behind the old barn because there had been an awful lot ( Read more... )

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borgmama1of5 May 18 2010, 05:16:38 UTC

Whoa!

Love the POV! Makes it so mysterious and yet obvious to us.

Who did it turn out that he was talking to though?

tahirire May 19 2010, 04:01:54 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you loved it!

Well ... he's talking to whoever it is that's looking for Sam. (Dean, I think, lol.)

lotr_lemmy May 18 2010, 05:26:32 UTC

I like... alot.

Talking to Dean at the end? :)

tahirire May 19 2010, 04:00:46 UTC

Of course, who else would be looking for Sam?

*shifty eyes*

;)

kajmere May 18 2010, 05:48:42 UTC

wow.

just wow.

he was talking to Dean yeah? this is wonderful. love the POV so much, very unique writting :D and you nailed it.

Thanks hun!

tahirire May 19 2010, 04:00:15 UTC

Thanks so much, I'm glad you liked it!

As for him talking to Dean ... I'd say Dean's got his work cut out for him, finding Sammy this time. ;)

vanillafluffy May 18 2010, 06:01:19 UTC

This is 57 varieties of awesome! Would you consider posting it to bystanderfic, a community of outsider POV fics?

tahirire May 19 2010, 03:59:20 UTC

57, really!? O.O Sweet! :D

Thanks for telling me about the comm, I didn't know about that one. I posted it over there this morning. And thanks so much for reading! :)

katiestitch May 18 2010, 06:01:43 UTC

I LOVE this fic. Like, really love it. Sam is completely awesome in this, and I love that he burns cold. (Yay for including that detail, which was SO COOL when Show revealed it, btw).

So basically, it's awesome and I love it.

tahirire May 19 2010, 03:58:18 UTC

Thank you!!

I can't tell you how hard I squeed when they made Lucifer ice. In my head, Sam has always been the fire element and Dean has always been the Ice. Which is pretty evident if you read Fire and Ice, LOL. Anyway, it made me squee b/c Sam and Lucifer were perfect counterpoints that way. That was probably my favorite thing. :)

♥

katiestitch May 19 2010, 15:20:57 UTC

I thought it was such cool characterization (haha, unintentional pun) that they did that. See, everyone talks about Sam being angry and traditionally anger is associated with fire, but I think ice suits him much better because when Sam is really angry? Dude is focused, calm and COLD. Like, kill your entire family to make sure you and your loved ones can't hurt him or Dean again kind of cold.

So the idea of Lucifer!Sam burning cold made me totally squee because controlled!rage!Sam is something I've been waiting to see since, like season 2. Why is Sam so hot when he's angry? Why? I don't find homicidal anger attractive in real guys. (Although really, I find just about every Sam characteristic attractive, so... eh. Whatever.)