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tahirire

Fic: Aequitas

Feb 12, 2010 16:52

Fic: Aequitas
Author: tahirire
Wordcount: 609
Rating: PG -13, darkness
Characters: Dean, Sam
Spoilers: Tag for 5.14
Disclaimer: No one owns anything around here. We all just share. Like a bunch of herpes Hippies.
Beta: blacklid
Warnings: My generic major character death fic list.

( HOPELESS/I'm falling down/FEEL THIS/I can't wake up/I can not hold on/I will not let go )

fanfic

Comments 27

chiiyo86 February 12 2010, 22:00:31 UTC

Gah. WHY MUST YOU STOMP ON MY HEART LIKE THIS?!

This line particularly got to me:

and Dean is all pale and covered in blood - always covered in blood in Sam’s mind

That being said, I appreciated the slivery line of the difference made between "getting pinned into a fatal situation and walking into one willingly."

tahirire February 14 2010, 21:07:35 UTC

We take our silver linings when we can, with Show. ;)

alwaysenduphere February 12 2010, 22:33:44 UTC

I'm wearing my Boondock Saints hat right now!!!

...okay, gonna actually read this now then edit this comment. :P

OH, Sammy. :(

tahirire February 14 2010, 21:08:02 UTC

Boondock Saints FTW!

Eyenoes. :(

lotr_lemmy February 12 2010, 22:55:53 UTC

Guh. Once again you are amazing...

I guess Dean's icy heart is what will cool Sam's flaming one.

Oh BOYS.

tahirire February 14 2010, 21:10:45 UTC

Actually, I'm more hoping that Sam's fire can help bring Dean back to life.

All comes out the same in the wash, really. ;)

blacklid February 12 2010, 23:16:37 UTC

YOU KNOW I LOVE THIS. AND THEM. AND YOU.

tahirire February 13 2010, 23:08:19 UTC

DEPRESSION DOES NOT EXIST INSIDE THIS DOJO, DOES IT.

fannishliss February 12 2010, 23:49:11 UTC

wow, nifty idea and very beautiful poetic execution. nice!

tahirire February 14 2010, 21:11:37 UTC

Thanks! It's a weird sort of closure for me to finally fic the panic room. I'm glad it came out right. :)