Comments | taffetablue: FIC: A Supermarket in California

taffetablue

FIC: A Supermarket in California

May 23, 2006 11:04

Fic: A Supermarket in California
Fandom/Pairing: SGA, John/Rodney
Rating: R
( John decides that California doesn’t seem like such a bad idea. )

Comments 336

iamtheenemy May 23 2006, 18:52:51 UTC

I have to come back to read this later, but I have to say: OMG ALLEN GINSBURG LOVE!!!

taffetablue May 24 2006, 22:55:45 UTC

YES. I have to say that I have criticisms of Howl, but come on, the third part? And I love A Supermarket in California. Ten different kinds of yes.

etui May 23 2006, 18:56:25 UTC

Hee! I really enjoyed this. I loved John courting Rodney with coffee and ice cream and snacks, and Rodney totally oblivious.

taffetablue May 24 2006, 22:56:49 UTC

Thank you so much! :x And, hee, totally. He's just like, "Yes, thank you, now would you please leave me alone so I can be brilliant in peace? Goodbye."

panisdead May 23 2006, 19:00:09 UTC

What a sweet, calm story. I love it.

taffetablue May 24 2006, 22:57:05 UTC

Thank you!

aspacer May 23 2006, 19:13:22 UTC

yum

taffetablue May 24 2006, 22:57:14 UTC

:> Thank you!

fairestcat May 23 2006, 19:22:18 UTC

Oh. This is wonderful. The slow build of it and John's pov are both just terrific. This is a John and a Rodney that I can really see.

There's a real sense of place to this too, which I just love. Really, I just love everything about this.

taffetablue May 24 2006, 22:57:56 UTC

Thank you so much! That was one of my goals -- in my head, John falls in love with California, and I really wanted a sense of that. I'm glad it came across. ♥