our broken paradise {#1}

Aug 23, 2015 20:40

don't wake me up
donghae/jessica
pg, canon, 413w
her smile was too beautiful for a dream.

» inspired by super junior's don't wake me up.

too scary for a nightmare )

fandom: dong bang shin ki, pairing: donghae/jessica, fandom: so nyeo shi dae, pairing: g dragon/cl, fandom: super junior, pairing: changmin/yoona, #drabble, fandom: 2ne1, fandom: big bang

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p_swizzle August 23 2015, 13:52:38 UTC
awww this is heartbreaking :(

it's hard for him to just fake a smile, to fake the part where he keeps saying to himself that he'd moved on from her. it's hard when he sees how happy she's being around tyler. it hurts. - ;;;;;;

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taeverlasting August 23 2015, 15:47:20 UTC
i know right (but my writing is much more heartbreaking, i'm lacking of so many things).

hi dear poonam! it's such an honor because you're like my favorite writer and you actually read my writing. thank you for reading this awful piece ♥♥♥

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p_swizzle August 23 2015, 19:01:58 UTC
ahhh hi lisa! i kinda thought it was you but i wasn't sure haha ;;

and noooo this isn't awful at all :) also reading your twice drabbles made me so happy :)

i need to talk to you abt all of my bts ships omg

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taeverlasting August 24 2015, 07:43:02 UTC
yup, that's me hehe.

really? you're so sweet poonam dear and you read them too? i'm so, so happy that they made you happy and please, you should write more about twice/sixteen girls!

please do tell me every single detail about your bts ships because i'm completely bangtanized right now haha!

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sooriforever August 25 2015, 13:09:57 UTC
SCREAMS at the changyoon and skydragon !!!!!!!!!!
aww I like how you formed those sentences, it's so...poetic, somehow? IDK how to explain but I really like this. Thanks for writing<3

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taeverlasting August 25 2015, 14:26:26 UTC
SCREAMS KIMMY SENPAI NOTICED ME.

aww thank you for reading! i'm still improving but thank you for the kind words! i really like yours too!! ♥

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sooriforever August 26 2015, 10:43:18 UTC
You're so cute kekekeke
Thank you! :)

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aoza August 25 2015, 13:33:44 UTC
aww the changyoon

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taeverlasting August 25 2015, 14:15:28 UTC
omg nikka senpai just noticed me

THANK YOU SENPAI FOR READING

sorry for being creepy

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kurdoodle August 26 2015, 00:13:53 UTC
oh dang i was just writing a donghae/jessica drabble too ;_; the feels...

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taeverlasting August 26 2015, 09:21:14 UTC
i just miss jessica /sorry for being emotional/.

thank you for reading this! i hope you'll post it soon hehe

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