Grass Fire - Chapter 14

[taemun]

Title: Grass Fire
Pairing: YunJae
Length: 14/?
Genre: Historical AU, Adventure, Romance, Drama, Angst
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Prostitution, Rape, Slavery
Disclaimer: Based on the graphic novel Habibi by Craig Thompson

Summary: Since the night he caught Yunho mid-air, Jaejoong has never once lost his fighting spirit. With nothing but an old family

Comments

[taigrin]

Hola, I hate you. Bye ♥

[taemun]

Don't hate me DDD:D:DD:

Now tell me what you thought abt the story, pabo!!!

[taigrin]

The story is really great but slo~w because they've been apart way too long but HOPEFULLY NOW THEY'LL BE TOGETHER AGAIN. I mean, I guess now we'll have zillions of tons of angst (yeyyyyyyyy!1!!) but at least they will be in the same space and time and seeing each other :D

CAN'T WAIT TO READ THEIR MEETING, PLEASE DON'T MAKE ME WAIT

[taemun]

hahaha oTL i can only hope you still reading means it wasn't all too sloooooow xD but dun worry... reunion promised to happen in the next chapter xD yes, same space and time hahahaha

ok ok i'll try my best ;; why can't fics just write themselves i do have it all in my head???!1?

[taigrin]

It was slow regarding their relationship but the story itself wasn't really that heavy paced so it was ok even if too frustrating at times XD

I have a few ideas to write but I'm so slow, I totally understand what you mean ; ^ ;

[taemun]

bu bu bu but if they weren't slow jaejoong would never fall in love with yunho like that ;; aigoo

yeah, i really envy all the writers who seem to just open their mouth and throw it up ;; lol not the best figure of speech but you know what i mean! xDD

[taigrin]

But is Jaejoong really in love with Yunho? I didn't get it that way. I mean, it's crystal clear that Yunho has ~feelings~ for (and lusts over) him but not the other way around. As I see it, Jaejoong's idea of Yunho is still of a child he protected and cared lots about but nothing else. I guess that's gonna change when he meets again with HOT!HOT!HOT!YUNNIE-ALL-GROWN-UP but still, knowing you, it'll take time for him to change his way of seeing Yunho and for Yunho to understand that there's nothing wrong with loving another man...

W00T YUNJAE SEX WITH VIRGINAL YUNNIE AND EXPERIENCED JAEJOONG THAT THINKS THAT SEX IS NOT PLEASURABLE

[taigrin]

omg I was doing the dishes and thinking about yunjae sex (lol, so glad my flatmates can't read my mind ahahahahaha /dies)... ARE YOU GONNA MAKE YUNHO HORNY, JAEJOONG WILL NOTICE IT, AND ASK HIM IF HE NEEDS HELP TO RELIEVE HIMSELF? OMG BECAUSE FOR JAEJOONG SEX HAS NO FEELINGS ATTACHED SO HE THINKS IT DOESN'T MEAN ANYTHING, RIGHT? Well, of maybe he does but with his lifestyle he might have forgotten T^T

[taemun]

hahaha in ways you are so right~~ and in ways you are so wrong :D i did say "jaejoong would never" for a reason... indeed yunho is the most important person of his whole life, but that applies to what he thinks yunho is... which, as you said, is a 12-year-old little boy jaejoong regards as his own son even more than a borther xD so yeah, his feelings will have to change.

is yunnie so vriginal tho???? i remember there was a mentor-like character who taught him a little bit about sex before.... hmmmmmm

AND I AM NOT TELLING YOU HOW THE SEX SHALL HAPPEN I'VE ALREADY SPOILED TOO MUCH

[taigrin]

This is unfair, you ask for my opinion and I give it to you, the least you can do to thank me is to spoil me a little bit more!!!! Otherwise I'll never ever say anything again even if I have so much fun imagining what's gonna happen next with you *pouts*

Oh, ok, maybe Yunnie isn't that virginal but he needs to polish his muscle'd pole a little bit more still XDDDD

[taigrin]

I was thinking.

YOU BETTER REUNITE THEM AT THE BEGINNING OF NEXT CHAPTER AND NOT AT THE END AND LEAVE US WITH A MASSIVE CLIFFHANGER AGAIN.

Please?

;_____;

[taigrin]

OMG ALSO WHO WILL SPOT WHO FIRST? BECAUSE YUNHO SURELY STILL REMEMBERS JAEJOONG BUT IT'S BEEN A LONG TIME AND IF HE GOES DRESSED AS A PRINCESS... AND JAEJOONG ONLY HAS YUNHO IN MIND AS A 12 YO KID, NOT AS THE MAN HE IS SO OMG ARE THEY GONNA FALL IN LOVE WITH EACH OTHER ALL OVER AGAIN? OMG BECAUSE YUNHO IS "MUTE"... AND OMG, HE WRITES JAEJOONG'S NAME EVERYWHERE SO MAYBE JAEJOONG READS THAT BEFORE REALLY MEETING YUNHO? OMG SO MANY THINGS THAT CAN HAPPEN, I NEED THE NEXT EPISODE AND TO STOP CAPSLOCKING OMG.

This is all your fault. This is why I always leave short comments, NOW I'M ALL EXCITED AGAIN.

[taigrin]

EVIL GHOSTIE, I BET YOU'RE LAUGHING NOW

[taemun]

"polish his muscle'd pole" OMG MARTA HAHAHAHAHAAHHAHAHAHAHHHAHAHAHAAHAHAAA well when it comes to Yun's "muscle'd pole" it can never be polished enough I guess xDD

And omg you know me too well xD cliffhanger?? what cliffhanger^^ i never write those

ooh, fall in love with each other all over again? 8) that would be a nice plot!!! ...but no. well, in a sense hey do i guess.... well especially jaejoong right.... hehehehehehe and jaejoong's name aigoo

also it's called "chapter" not "episode" xDD

and damN RIGHT I'M LAUGHING xDDDDD THIS IS THE BEST

[taigrin]

Seriously, if you end the next chapter right in the moment they realize who are each other or something like that I'm gonna get mad :( unless you post 2 chapters at the same time.

LOL, did I say episode? Hahaha, that's because I'm marathoning a TV serie and my mind is all buzzed XD

Let me start polishing my blade, just in case you decide to be mean /stares.

[taemun]

hahahahaha now i feel the urge to do just so to tease you :PP but no, that's not how it's going down at all...

/starts building up a fortress