Thunder and Thunderstorms

May 19, 2013 22:18

Title: Thunder and Thunderstorms
Pairing: YunJae
Length: One-shot
Genre: Romance, Fluff
Rating: PG-13

Summary: There have always been two constants in Jaejoong’s life.

One is thunder.

The other one is Yunho.

And more often than not, these two have tended to appear hand in hand. )

❄ band: dbsk, ♫ fanfic, ☂ title: thunder and thunderstorms, ♡ yunjae

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hattukissa May 21 2013, 08:09:58 UTC
Somehow I was really touched by this ;__; I won't say anything about the things that I know are real but, DAMN Yunho is so fucking dreamy!! T___T I felt so lonely after reading this.. can this kind of perfect and pure love even exist?? ;__; *sobs* their childhood seamed so innocent and I love how they grew up together just like that.. always there for each other ;__; and I loved how they really liked each other on the inside even when Yunho really annoyed Jaejoong ;^; just like things often go in real life! This was so realistic, really.. all the tiny details and each scenes.. I feel like this whole story was actually real O__O like the scene where they took the boat and stuff. It felt so freaking REAL!!

You're really the best at writing friendship that slowly turns into something more.. it makes me wonder if that's the kind of love you want to have for yourself as well? ;^; *gets bricked for a personal question* I totally get why Jae thought Yunho was being manly when he did something like that for the kids.. *dreamy sigh* where can I find a guy like that?? (one that's as handsome as Yunho is of course D:) NOWHERE!! this was really a perfect fic to read before going to bed even though it made me a bit sad in all its perfectness (is that a word?) OTL

I think this fic was written really well too~ All the scenes seemed perfectly thought out and they fit together so well! Each scene was totally necessary and I enjoyed every moment of it! Did you write it from jumping one scene to another or in the right order? It was really fluent! *__* All the dialogue was so good too. From the time they were kids it was really cute and then when they were teenagers it was sarcastic and you know, teenager-like! XD

The ending was so perfect too. I love how Yunho likes to feel manly and strong even though Jae is perfectly capable of taking care of himself and isn't even scared or anything lol :DDD and Jaejoong just gives him that <3__<3 I'd skip a million lightning storms for a night embraced by Yunho.. aigoo.. I'm so love sick now, thanks to you! XD and I'm pretty sure there's plenty of thunder in the bedroom for them, if you know what I mean ;);););) *wiggles eyebrows* I LOVED THIS~ <3

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taemun May 21 2013, 09:04:28 UTC
Are you commenting at work??? Gurrllll... xD

I don't know if love like this exists ;-; Not for me at least /bawls/ And hehe, every single thunderstorm was based on a real one (the last scene was my sister's experience tho xDD) so I'm glad it felt realistic!^^

Haha personal questions are okay~~ :PP Well, one thing is for sure: I don't even get crushes instantly, so falling love would take ages for me for sure >___< No first sights for me~

I think I wrote most of it in right order, only that I wrote the last scene after the first one? And yeah, I remember reading once an article in a newspaper where they had asked several men when it is that they feel the manliest/most masculine... And the most frequent answer was that when they are protecting their family :'3 For example if they are scared of thunder or smth. ;-; Yunho is like that, a normal guy who wants to feel like that... And Jaejoong knows him well enough so he lets him pretend a little xD Not that he doesn't enjoy the attention himself ;D And there is sure to be lots of thunder for them in the bedroom ;);)

Thank you for your lovely comment~~ Always make my day brighter~

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hattukissa May 21 2013, 09:30:11 UTC
Lol you caught me! xD we're having a slow day here... ;^;
Don't say that silly!! <3 there's love for each and every one of us~ <3 *is a hopeless romantic* so.. the under the boat kiss happened to your sister? O__O that's so romantic T_______T
We're like the opposites.. I always fall in love at first sight and you take time.. I just get bored with time XD
Aigoo.. I just want to have a protective man of my own .__. I've never really had that .____.

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taemun May 21 2013, 09:57:29 UTC
Nooo not that one, the last one! xD The one with her half-sleeping boyfriend hitting her when he tries to hug her in his sleep and telling her not to be scared because he will protect her...when in reality she's not scared of thunder at all xD

The under the boat kiss is just my imagination :'D

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hattukissa May 21 2013, 10:14:19 UTC
That's unbelievably adorable too ;____; /sobs

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