Pain Touch - Attempt Two -- SONG

[tactlesstruth]

This gets more of the feeling out, and the ending is better,  (the last line) I think.
It's a whole other thing in it's own right really.
It's a full song now.
This was re-written EARLY in the morning. One of those nights where I'm, like usual, dragged out of a good nights sleep from all encompassing pain. So I was TIRED, Cranky cause I was dragged up out of a DEEP RESTFUL ESCAPE, and tortured.
This is the edit of what originally came out.
I'll post the original next.

but here it is...

Shake and sputter
cough and mutter
god let me
god let me
escape this
paaaiiinnnn
to much for my being
to much for me
to comprehend
blank out
Mind blank out
frigid white

and I cannot
see
for all the
torture
now engulfing me

beeeeiiinnngggg
fragile life
on thread it hangs
shivering & weak
I kneel at the creek
begging
for escape from this

god sssseeeee me
feel my pain and let me be
one with
you
in all of eternity

escape this
warm engulfing dark
encompassing all that I know

sssaaafffeeettttttttyyyy
in your arms
now I am warm

kkkkkeeeeeeepppppp mmmeeee.
In your warmth shadow grows
all over
around the land
and now I can
feeeelllll you
touch my soul
it’s time to go

escape this
hell I’m in
never to experience again.

Ffffrrrrreeeeee now,
on the other side
do not cry

for I am,
free from the (tortured side of me.)
Pain
Free from the torture that was life for me.