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Cruising Craigslist looking for possible replacements for my dead (again) Civic. Ouch, it's painful. I'm not the world's best writer, but damn. Here is an example of what's killing me.
"i have a 1995 Honda Prelude Si it has coilovers stock rims it is a 5 speed stage 1 clutch runs great but i need to trade it or sale it i would love to trade for a 5 speed 4dr car or an ext cab truck full size i just had a baby and need something bigger but you can offer away and i will look at all offers send me pics to my email Hxxx5@yahoo.com and ask questions and put the subject (prelude 95) or you can send pics to my phone and text me and if you call and i dont answer leave a message and i will call you back when i get a chance but texting is the best way to get in touch with me (678)630-xxxx please NO SCAMMERS SPAM AND I DO NOT NEED HELP SELLING MY CAR SO DONT ASK please offer away and i do have a price in mind that i want to get out of it but just offer away and we can go from there thanks"
Punctuation! Please! I can hear your voice in my head, and the fact that you didn't pause to take a breath is very disturbing to me.
"i have a 1995 Honda Prelude Si it has coilovers stock rims it is a 5 speed stage 1 clutch runs great but i need to trade it or sale it i would love to trade for a 5 speed 4dr car or an ext cab truck full size i just had a baby and need something bigger but you can offer away and i will look at all offers send me pics to my email Hxxx5@yahoo.com and ask questions and put the subject (prelude 95) or you can send pics to my phone and text me and if you call and i dont answer leave a message and i will call you back when i get a chance but texting is the best way to get in touch with me (678)630-xxxx please NO SCAMMERS SPAM AND I DO NOT NEED HELP SELLING MY CAR SO DONT ASK please offer away and i do have a price in mind that i want to get out of it but just offer away and we can go from there thanks"
Punctuation! Please! I can hear your voice in my head, and the fact that you didn't pause to take a breath is very disturbing to me.