story
Okay,so I wrote a story.Please read the following and comment:
Summary:Rachel Summar is a 15-year-old senior in High School.She's pretty,has lots of friends,is the obsession of almost every guy.But she's not happy,because she pretends to be someone she's not...In reality she is a boy named Matthew,who is pansexual and likes art,music,and psychology.She is very depressed,being trapped in the body of a girl.
But then one day,a tranny boi named Andrew comes to her school who is "out and proud".But they have NOTHING in common,interest or personality-wise.But soon Matthew falls in love with Andrew,and will do ANYTHING to win his love and become the person he really is inside.
(Piano and violin music starts to play)
(Shows a high school,with teens going in and out the corridors)
(The screen switches to a very pretty,thin girl with long,dark brown hair staring out the window)
(2 other girls walk in the classroom)
Girls:Coming,Rachel????
(The girl with the long dark hair,RACHEL, turns around and smiles)
Rachel:Coming..
(Switches to RACHEL and 2 other girls walking down the hallway and 2 guys start whistling at her,RACHEL blushes)
(screen blackens and says "Everyone who "knew" her thought she had it all")
(switches to RACHEL laying on her bed,staring at the ceiling)
(SCREEN blackens and words say,"But she had a deep dark secret...")
(Screen switches to RACHEL,nude,and staring at herself in the mirror)
(Words say "And has come to realize that there is more than meets the eye..."
(RACHEL turns around and faces the camera)
RACHEL:(in a whisper)My name is Matthew...
(SCREEN SAYS,"She had nowhere to go")
(Shows RACHEL runnig through the woods crying)
(WORDS SAY,"No one to turn to...")
RACHEL:You ever think..that there's more to a person than their appearance?
GIRL:-laughs snobbishly)Well,like,no way!Appearance DOES matter.-laughs again)
(RACHEL looks sad)
(WORDS SAY,"until one day.."
(RACHEL and her gang of friends turn and watch a student come down the hall.The student is biologically female,but is wearing boy clothing)
BOY:What he fuck?
BOY 2:Is she a lesbo,or something?
GIRL:You can't look at her and tell?
(GROUP laughs.The tranny boi catches RACHEL's eye.RACHEL stares.)
(WORDS say,"The boy of his dreams came.")
(shows RACHEL running towards ANDREW,with arms wide open)
RACHEL:(holding unto Andrew)Please...stay...
ANDREW:why?
(RACHEL looks up at him)
(HE WILL DO ANYTHING TO BECOME WHO HE IS INSIDE)
(Shows RACHEL putting on boy clothes)
(AND WIN THE MAN OF HIS DREAMS)
(shows back to MATTHEW and ANDREW)
MATTHEW:Because I need you.I LOVE you...
(ANDREW stares at him)
(BUT WILL THE LOVE BE RETURNED?)
(ANDREW breaks free of MATTHEW's grasp and walks away)
(AND WILL EVEYONE ELSE UNDERSTAND?)
Girl:I don't undertand WHY you hang on with that lezzie fag.
RACHEL:Don't say that!
(TITLE shows up:The other side of me)
(music stops playing)
ANDREW:Kiss me...
(MATTHEW pauses and then leans upwards towrds his lips)
COMING SOON TO LIVEJOURNAL,GREATESTJOURNAL,AND MYSPACE