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I’ve never been able to imagine their first time going smoothly. From how I see it, Barnaby’s a virgin and Kotetsu is a man who has previously only had heterosexual experiences.
I can see their first time as endearing, but at the same time, everything that can go wrong, well, does. Everything from Kotetsu gagging on Barnaby’s cock to Barnaby struggling to put a condom on to the both of them slipping off the bed to even the accidental crude noise is completely welcome. But even amidst all these disasters, the two are patient enough to make it romantic (even if it is a teensy bit pathetic).
Bunny on top, please~!
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"I guess it couldn't hurt?"
More lube on Bunny's hand, applied directly to his cock; Kotetsu did his best not to tense up. People did this all the time, it must feel good. The foreplay sure had. He reached for Bunny's cock, helping position it at his opening. He felt it press at the slight resistance, and then he was in. "Huh," he said.
"Is that good? Are you all right?"
"Yeah, I'm good." Bunny was pushing further in, slowly, and Kotetsu put his arms around him. "It just feels so different from anything I'm used to." He'd thought the fingers had made him feel stretched open - that was nothing. Bunny was inside him.
"So does this," Bunny said softly. "God, you feel amazing."
"You look amazing," Kotetsu said. He was slightly flushed, and rumpled, and those beautiful green eyes were focused on him, only him, and his body was taut and tensed over him. Sure, most of the heroes had great builds, but there was something more about Bunny's. Probably just ( ... )
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That was ridiculously cute and hilariously sexy. I absolutely loved it. ;v;!
Thank you so much, writer!anon! :D and keep up the good work! <3
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I can totally see their first time being just like this. XD
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This was definitely entertaining and worth re-reading. The awkwardness was charming (especially Barnaby asking about cuddling at the end) and I laughed aloud at several points (eg, when we see Barnaby's array of supplies, Kotetsu's commentary on the various condoms).
Also, your depiction of fellatio did not make me roll my eyes! *applauds and hands you a gold star and an internet*
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