Tiger and Bunny Anon Meme Part 1

Apr 14, 2011 17:52

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Re: Open up (2/3) anonymous June 15 2011, 18:13:04 UTC
Barnaby was warm and smooth along Kotetsu's back, mouthing each of his scars and smelled like whiskey and bourbon and somehow all that stuff he'd said was getting to Kotetsu and fuck, fuck, he was blushing like some fangirl. He wanted to say something in response, not sure what, but when he opened his mouth all that came out was, 'But, Bunny--'

'Shh. I owe you this.' Lips, against the back of his neck, sucking and kissing and nipping lightly, marking the skin and somehow, that searing kiss was the hottest thing of all. Kotetsu's hips jerked slightly in answer to that exquisite torture, his mind reeling, groaning hungrily as he realized that Barnaby was rutting against his thigh, still far too clothed.

'Do it,' he finally gasped, realizing that-- yes, actually-- he wanted this, or wanted something like it. He wanted companionship. Camraderies, closeness, trust. Someone to care for who cared for him, too. Someone to kiss those scars he got when he was careless, reckless, to scold him, to soothe him.

Someone to balance him out.

'Fuck me.'

Barnaby shuddered above him, and maybe they weren't entirely sober, yeah, but these activities were quickly fixing that. The blood was still pounding in Kotetsu's head but for a different reason now. As Barnaby slid back, the room split with the sound of zippered teeth yawning open, rustling, struggling, and finally Barnaby's naked thighs rested against Kotetsu's, as Barnaby smoothed on-- Kotetsu couldn't help grinning, thinking how quaint-- a condom before he pressed the head of his dick against the same ring of muscle he had been tasting, teasing with his fingers not too long ago.

Kotetsu tensed up.

It was the slowest. Movement. Ever made. Every milimeter was a century of torturous waiting, as Barnaby carefully glided in, so very stubborn that even Kotetsu's insistent attempts to force him to go faster were met with utter defeat. It didn't hurt at all, Barnaby's way. Ached, maybe, and Kotetsu was having trouble breathing, he never knew he could stretch so far. But it didn't hurt.

By the time Barnaby had seated himself as far inside Kotetsu as he could go, they were both breathless, Kotetsu's free hand scrabbling for purchase on the floor, face hot and mouth open to pant and hiss and moan.

'Good?' Barnaby asked, in a low voice that sounded like he was having trouble maintaining his self-control.

It was not enough of a word for how it felt. Grinding his hips back against Barnaby, Kotetsu sucked in a breath and whimpered wantonly. 'B-b. Better. Hey,' and his breath caught in his throat, he had to swallow hard to get the words out. 'Hey, Bunny, move.'

They were utterly still, that pressure building up inside of Kotetsu as he shook and sweat and salivated for more.

'Move!'

It was as though he'd fired a pistol to start a race. Barnaby's self-control seemed to snap audibly, hips pulling back sharply, then plunging him in, so suddenly it wrested an answering groan from Kotetsu's throat. He started shallow, slick skin against slick skin and, deeper, the rough slide of unlubricated rubber that separated them, barely, barely. Kotetsu could have just sat there cross-eyed and watched stars flash as Barnaby fucked him all day, helpless and happy to be there, lustily urging him on with a steady growl of pleasure and the continuous grinding of his own hips, down and back to meet those amazing thrusts. If only that were his job, he thought languidly.

Barnaby kept one hand loosely on Kotetsu's hips, the other sliding up his chest, fingers skimming over sweaty skin, finding a nipple, twisting it, pinching it and Kotetsu gasped, his whole body clenching in a spasm of sympathetic pleasure. Holyshitwhat. The fuck was.

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Re: Open up (3/4) anonymous June 15 2011, 18:14:35 UTC
And then Barnaby was fucking him so hard that stars were nothing. Barnaby had stamina. Barnaby was fucking Kotetsu six ways to Sunday. He was fucking him into the floor, and Kotetsu pushed his face down into the carpet and his ass up and his voice spiraled high, some kind of disconnect tripping his brain over itself. His thoughts, always chaotic and racing about in his native tongue, found themselves given voice on a tongue long since trained to speak the lingua franca of Stern Bild.

'[Oh, fuck, fuck, fuck you're so--]' Barnaby sank his teeth into Kotetsu's shoulder, hand gripping his other nipple now, cock slamming home so hard that Kotetsu's back arced reflexively, his dick pulsing hungrily, eyes sliding shut in absolute bliss. '[--I can't-- I-- I want to-- oh, god, please don't stop, please, please, please I'm so close--]"

Something about his tone must have given him away. Barnaby hissed, shuddering, and slipped his hand down Kotetsu's chest, his belly to grip his straining prick. "Beg," Barnaby hissed, and Kotetsu did, urgently, earnestly.

'[Please! Let me- let me-]'

Another thrust so hard and so deep that Kotetsu's breath stuttered, his skin feeling too tight to contain him, sweating hard, working hard, headache forgotten in the thrill of the moment. The confusion. The madness, the raw unbending need singing through his entire body.

"Beg," Barnaby crooned into his ear, licking it, squeezing his hand and slowing his thrusts a moment to catch his breath. "Beg for it a little more and then I'll let you come, Kotetsu."

Hearing his own name, laden with so much lust, nearly did Kotetsu in. He babbled needily, Struggling to pull free of the handcuffs keeping him secure, sharp metal ringing high in unsteady pulses to match the senseless tumble of his words. '[Fuck, I wanted this-- I didn't think-- Barnaby, fuck, please don't stop, just use me--]'

The world narrowed to a pinpoint and exploded into a supernova, Kotetsu screaming himself hoarse with pleasure.

'[Command me!]'

Barnaby's lips pressed between his shoulder blades and his fist was stroking Kotetsu off and his voice, jittering and sparking like the hot glimmer of electricity buzzing through the room, told Kotetsu, "Come for me. Just for me, not for anyone else. Think only of me."

And the very thought of driving all his normal hectic worries about Kaede or Tomoe or the people of Stern Bild or their boss or Antonio or anyone else away was the final straw, as Kotetsu sobbed and his balls pulled tight and he came so hard he thought he might pass out. '[Yes yes yes yes yessss--!]'

It wasn't much longer-- a few more slams of Barnaby's hips, that hand still stroking Kotetsu's spent and aching cock-- before they fell still, Barnaby buried deep in Kotetsu's ass, slumped over him, Kotetsu pinned to the floor, filled with Barnaby's seed and insensate. They breathed together, and dozed there, drowsy and dreamy, utterly sated.

When Barnaby finally rose, sliding free of Kotetsu's ass, they both hissed in remembered pleasure.

"Fuck," Kotetsu murmured eloquently, his abused voice breaking low, rumbling dry in his throat. "That...that was."

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Re: Open up (4/4) anonymous June 15 2011, 18:15:03 UTC
"Nn," was the tacit agreement, as Barnaby shook his head at the broken condom in his hand. So much for that. "I was too rough with you," he said at last, his own voice not much stronger. "I'm sorry."

"S'fine." And it was, even if he would probably be sore once he really came to his senses, and the floor was probably not the most comfortable place in the world to nap but he couldn't bring himself to care. "S'good."

Barnaby knelt beside him, stroking Kotetsu's cheek with the backs of the knuckles of his clean hand. When Kotetsu turned his face into the gesture, a wicked smile caught at the younger man's lips. "You sounded," he teased mischievously, "awfully compliant, old man."

"Hmm," Kotetsu agreed with a happy hum, drifting someplace where thought didn't quite connect with deed and he was nuzzling Barnaby's fingers for a whole five seconds more before his eyes snapped open, alarm and embarrassment coloring his face. "W-wait, what--?"

"I'll be back in a moment," Barnaby purred, standing and staring down at Kotetsu's deliciously debauched body with an appreciative leer, enjoying the way the older man flushed darker and tried (futilely) to hide his nakedness. "Try to enjoy yourself while I find the key to those cuffs."

"Bunny--?" Kotetsu called meekly, as Barnaby slipped off into his bedroom.

No answer.

Ah, fuck. There was his headache again.

And then, twirling the key with a downright evil smile, Barnaby reappeared, leaning casually against the doorway. "Do you always speak in Japanese when men are fucking you?"

Kotetsu squeaked helplessly, unable to answer, flushed red from head to toe.

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Re: Open up (4/4) anonymous June 15 2011, 18:36:03 UTC
This was awesome.Anon loves Barnaby's question at the end.I was total win.

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Re: Open up (4/4) anonymous June 15 2011, 20:03:18 UTC
Fuck, this was hot. Awesome and hot. Loved the begging, and desperate Kotetsu is pretty much the best thing ever.

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Re: Open up (4/4) anonymous June 15 2011, 20:38:00 UTC
Utterly hot. I approve of Kotetsu being pounded into the floor like that. Okay, yes.

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Re: Open up (4/4) anonymous June 15 2011, 20:43:25 UTC
Read this with Closer by Nine Inch Nails as BGM.
HNNGH.
It makes it ten times hotter than it already is.

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Re: Open up (4/4) anonymous June 15 2011, 23:42:20 UTC
One of the best PWP's I have ever read in what, 8 years of fanfiction writing/reading. You can conclude I either read a lot of crap or that your writing is stunning, Wanon. Both would be right!

Just kidding ♥ You're marvelous, Wanon.

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Re: Open up (4/4) anonymous June 16 2011, 00:01:22 UTC
So hot. That was. The fu--

I love love loved the descriptive hot rough sex, it's hard to see it in fics today now, and to see it done so RIGHT. Plus the fact that you had the Japanese translated instead of actually spelling it out in romaji. FULLY AWESOME.

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Re: Open up (4/4) anonymous June 16 2011, 17:59:21 UTC
Anon is very pleased! and ahahah, yes. Translated because frankly, anon doesn't remember enough japanese not to thoroughly embarrass anonself. This seemed the more natural option. :) Thank you!

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Re: Open up (4/4) anonymous June 16 2011, 00:16:54 UTC
UNFFFF. Fucking hot.
BRB fanning myself to cool down.

That was the bomb, anon! 8D

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OP anonymous June 16 2011, 01:51:22 UTC
FUCK, YES, THIS IS THE BEST FILL EVER.

EXACTLY how I imagined it. Goddamn, I love you Writer!Anon. Do you have more stuff on the meme? Because your writing is just awesome and I'd like to read whatever else you've got.

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Re: OP anonymous June 16 2011, 18:03:41 UTC
Anon is so glad you enjoyed it, OP! :D

I do have more stuff! so far this is my only sexy prons though, so that stuff might not be what you're looking for, not sure. If you're still interested, I also wrote the Lunatic/Sky High 'Breathless' fill that's on the updates page, and that has a few more links to things I wrote on the meme!

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Re: Open up (4/4) anonymous June 16 2011, 15:55:39 UTC
Dear Author!Anon,
I would like to humbly ask for your hand in marriage.

This fill is a thing of beauty that is joy forever. It is exactly what I had been waiting and hoping to get from the Tiger&Bunny meme.

The characterization was spot on, in my eyes at least. There was also delightful amount of little details that hit pretty much all my preferences. Barnaby having small moments of hesitation/insecurity (possibly due to his own lack of extensive experience) while still being his smug, self-assured self. Kotetsu's lack of experience with the gay sex and embarrassment at his wanton behaviour once the after-glow wore off. Dominating!Bunny. Horny&begging!Kotetsu. The teasing/snark before and after the sex. Hard, hot sex of the "Bunny fucking Kotetsu to the floor" variety. Hand-cuffs. NGHHhhh...

Even things that I usually find unattractive, such as condoms (reality and fiction are separate issues, obviously), turned out to be kind of... hot and in-character. Or maybe the hot part was the broken condom? Either way, HOT.

Truly, Author!Anon, you have touched perfection with this fill. <3

PS. Would fall be a good time for the wedding?

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Re: Open up (4/4) anonymous June 16 2011, 18:06:05 UTC
Aw, shucks, readernon, you're so nice~ <3

It's funny you should mention the condom- I would not have included it, and then I thought it suited Barnaby, who probably has read about sex more than he's done it. If I can find a good PWP prompt that serves as a sequel I will probably have it come up again so Kotetsu can demand Barnaby cut it out.

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Re: Open up (4/4) anonymous June 17 2011, 10:25:52 UTC
Shall I take the silence as a sign of agreement to the marriage proposal, my love~? ^3^

Not only incredibly gifted in writing hot sex, but also humble? Oh, Author!Anon, could you be more amazing~?
That is to say, you deserved every word of praise and so much more. I've read the fill at least five times by now and it truly is wonderful in so many ways. <3

You are totally right, Author!Anon; the whole condom thing does seem very in character for Barnaby. He is sort of... fussy/uptight in that way. A sequel with Kotetsu teasing/mocking him about it (possible with something like "You do know I can't get pregnant, don't you?") and Barnaby getting huffy/annoyed, maybe spanking Kotetsu or tying him down or just otherwise "paying him back" and...
*cough*
... ahem, where was I? Right. Yes. Sequel addressing the condom issue would be all kinds of lovely. Perhaps one with some hot messy oral sex and/or facial as well...? (If Author!Anon is not turned off by blowjobs, of course.) Barnaby is young, so I'm sure he could get it up twice~ Or maybe Kotetsu's re-awakened sex drive is trying to make up for the lost opportunities~?

*browsing through the requests for potential prompts~*
How about the request for PWP with mirror?
Or perhaps some questionable photos happened during the drunken night?
A literal take on "lapful of tiger"?
I would had suggested the Animal Instincts, as the request is yummy sexy, but this fantastic fill of awesome perfection already more or less covers that request, too. Though, should the most wonderful Author!Anon choose to use that one for sequel, I am sure no one would mind. Actually, no one will mind whatever request Author!Anon uses, as long as there is a sequel.

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