Fic - Unforgivable Sinner

[szm]

This happens after Lucy. But you don't need to read that to understand this.

Title: Unforgivable Sinner
Author: szm
Characters: Jack, Ianto, Lucy Saxon
Rating: G/PG
Spoilers: Last of the Time Lords

Betaed by the lovely hellenebright

Summary: What happened to Lucy?

Comments

[jumperkid]

*shivers* Oh, that ending is super creepy! Very nice!

[szm]

Super fast reading! *g* Thank you very much.

It's amazing now creepy one little ring can be...

[jumperkid]

Oh. Heh. It's the last few minutes of work, and I don't really want to start a new project. Sshhhhhh.

It's always the little things that really mess you over in the end...

[szm]

*looks round shiftily* I promise not to tell...

[szm]

Thank you!

[jigot]

ooh - that's good!

[szm]

Thank you.

[likestowrite]

healthy dose of madness there, i loved it. And Ianto at the end aw bless he loves him really.

I would have liked to hear the transcription between Jack (and Ianto) and K. Swanson at 2 am

[szm]

Yep, that would have been an interesting conversation!

Glad you enjoyed it.

[ravanasnape]

I really liked both this and Lucy and I felt you captured her well. Watching DW, it was very hard to pin her character down - she was very edgy and broken; off-key. The way you describe her in this fits that nicely. :)

Are you going to be writing a third part?

[szm]

Thank you, Lucy is a really fasinating character to write, this isn't spot on but I think I'm getting there.

At the moment I have no idea what happens next.