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In This World and the Next Chapter 13

Jan 25, 2015 12:58

It took a while, but it's finally here. Here we learn exactly why Lord Potter (and by extension the author) thinks that Ron needs to be killed for something his future self did in another timeline. And it's as bad as you think it is.
( ITWATN Chapter 13 )

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woodenshy February 10 2015, 00:46:52 UTC

Okay...so...

War aside going on up there...oh boy.

Which do you guys think is worse: this or Hogwarts: Exposed? And yes, szaleniec, I'm reading that all the way from the beginning :P hence the question on chapter 16. *sigh* here I thought My Immortal was bad...now I think it's hilarious.

greener221 February 10 2015, 04:29:09 UTC

He's said a few times before that Hogwarts Exposed still remains more despicable. While ITWATN is sexist, projectionist, profane, implicating, dumb, senselessly character bashing, and just flat-out dumb and vile, HE is all of that, but with 10 times the words and written by a person that seems mentally incapable of waking up in the morning without jerking off to his desire to rape 10-year old girls to death. If you really want to understand Neil, look up "zeldaqueen the gang" on google.

sickbritkid2 February 11 2015, 17:57:18 UTC

*shudders*

I read her sporking of the first chapter of The Gang and couldn't go onward. I fear if I did, I would have to eat a gun out of sheer horror at that fic's depravity.

greener221 February 11 2015, 21:17:43 UTC

Neither could she. The spork ended up using a whole lot on snip-summary from Chapter 2 on. It's only natural when the fic spends 30+ paragraphs on the act of peeing in a cup.

sickbritkid2 February 12 2015, 16:12:04 UTC

It's only natural when the fic spends 30+ paragraphs on the act of peeing in a cup.

...what?

greener221 February 12 2015, 16:45:19 UTC

http://zelda-queen.livejournal.com/126774.html

Hyperbole, but still:

Benedict: *pissing into a cup* Hm, allow me to describe this all in the most nausating detail possible. My author does get off on that, after all, though he usually prefers to hear about little girls doing it. Hey, let me make mention of my "quite flaccid penis", since I'm sure you were all wondering what state my twelve-year-old junk was in!

sickbritkid2 June 10 2015, 07:25:46 UTC

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greener221 June 10 2015, 07:40:13 UTC

Delayed reaction much? At least I know you got the point.

sickbritkid2 June 10 2015, 07:44:11 UTC

Goddamnit! I was trying to get the comment count to a multiple of 5!

But yes, delayed reaction. I think my mind simply shutdown at first upon first reading...

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