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fly_buggy_fly April 21 2013, 22:54:24 UTC
Sometimes, I like to "correct" bad fics...I will now do that with some of this:

"Harry and I know what you were doing," Hermione said quickly, trying fruitlessly to gain her composure. Her face now also a bright red, though more from anger than embarrassment. "I just wasn't expecting either of the girls to witness such… Well, I guess it will make explaining it a little easier. And I can't believe you would do such a thing on the floor of our quarters! And now Harry and I must explain this to the girls..."

Emily shook her head in frustration was making gagging noises. "EWWWW GROSS. Why would you wanna lick that? Pee comes outta there!"

Emily turned toward Jamie. "Do you return the favor and suck Alex's penis? Why are you letting him do something so nasty?" she asked Jamie without the least trepidation.

"Okay you two," Harry said, pointing to the chesterfield. "Time for a father, daughter, mother talk."

"Can we get comfy first?" Caitlin asked innocently.

"I suppose so No! I'm being serious; it's hardly time for you to get naked!" Harry said, trying very hard to sound strict. "Hermione, did you want to get comfortable, too? In fact, no one is getting naked!"

Hermione stared questioningly at Harry and then glanced toward Alex.

"It's your option, Professor Granger," Alex said timorously. "My parents had no problems with me visiting Jamie parent's last year and they knew the Zacherley's would all be nude." Alex squeezed Jamie's hand to comfort her. "I'm past the ogling at naked women stage.

"Are we going to talk about sex?" Emily asked keenly, a look of horror on her face.

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Caitlin leaned over and whispered in Emily's ear. "I know I'm too young to have actual sex, but I'd love to experience what Alex did to Jamie today. She looked like she was in seventh heaven."

"I know what you mean, Eww, Caitlin, what's wrong with you??" Emily agreed shouted. "From the expression on her face it must have been pure delight I'd never let any one do something so gross to me."

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gargargarrick April 22 2013, 18:16:03 UTC
You are the wind beneath my wings. :o Also, I should make an icon of "in fact, no one is getting naked!" for general Exposed-related use.

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fly_buggy_fly April 23 2013, 00:01:10 UTC
Hahaha; that would make for a superfun icon XD

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