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Hogwarts Too Exposed Chapter 2 part 1

Nov 29, 2011 21:49

It's back.

( Hogwarts Too Exposed Chapter 2 )

show don't tell, separated by a common language, the pansexual '50s, did not do the bloody research, i can has characterisation, are you a witch or not, hogwarts school of oratory, hogwarts roboticised, americanisms in the potterverse, damning with faint praise, nudity for everyone, hermione in name only, epithet overload, harry potter, badfic:hogwarts too exposed, continuity isn't optional, literally stupid

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fly_buggy_fly November 30 2011, 00:12:24 UTC

I completely forogt that Draco was the one who knocked up Sam. For some reason, I thought maybe he was going to ask Ron for permission to marry Ginny or something. Don't ask where that came from...I don't know.

szaleniec1000 November 30 2011, 01:53:46 UTC

I don't think it was explicitly stated, just hinted at with all the subtlety the author could muster. Which is more or less the same thing.

fly_buggy_fly November 30 2011, 02:01:12 UTC

Once I understood what was going on, I was like "Oh. Yeah. That." I think I just forgot it because this thing is so effing LONG and pointless.

szaleniec1000 November 30 2011, 02:10:14 UTC

The Hogwarts Exposed tetralogy is 75,000 words of story in 750,000 of text.

taekarado November 30 2011, 12:34:35 UTC

no, thats a bit of an exaggeration. 7,500 words of story. 15,000 at the most.

szaleniec1000 November 30 2011, 12:38:56 UTC

Point!

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