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szaleniec1000

Hogwarts Exposed Chapter 19 part 2

Jul 09, 2011 14:21

Of course fake!Hermione isn't dead. We're not getting rid of her that easily.

( Hogwarts Exposed Chapter 19 (NSFW) )

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zelda_queen July 9 2011, 14:52:59 UTC

Very well said, especially on the "reproductive organs" thing. >_< The only squickier and unfortunate implication-y bit, which pretty much seems to serve to say "Girls, don't try to make decisions about having sex or getting abortions on your own. Only men should decide that. If you try to do those things on your own, you're an idiot who will probably get raped". D ( ... )

szaleniec1000 July 9 2011, 15:05:51 UTC

I meant that Hermione had been pregnant here and miscarried as a result of what happened in the last few chapters. It's what the fake-out refers to. We're meant to think right now that she's dead, only for it to be revealed at the beginning of next chapter that "I did everything I could" referred to that instead. I love how the conversation is so clumsily truncated that there's not even a close quote.

zelda_queen July 9 2011, 15:45:23 UTC

Ohh yeah, I remember that one now. -_- Christ, this thing was a regular soap opera of squick, wasn't it?

szaleniec1000 July 9 2011, 16:07:48 UTC

I've added it to Unfortunate Implications here.

zelda_queen July 9 2011, 16:37:24 UTC

Excellent! :D

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