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Reboot Fic: Interlude in Green - Draws Series VI [Pike/Kirk/McCoy, R]

Oct 12, 2009 23:17

Title: Interlude in Green (Draws VI)
Author: Acidqueen
Series: Reboot aka ST:XI aka AOS - Draws Series
Codes: Pike/Kirk/McCoy
Rating: R for some vocabulary
Word count: 2200
Disclaimer: Paramount/Viacom owns Star Trek, I own my brain.

Author's Note: This is a direct sequel to Domino Effects and may not make much sense without it. They are ( Read more... )

aos fic, pike/kirk/mccoy, draws series

Comments 48

rubynye October 12 2009, 22:03:22 UTC

AWWWWWWWWWW.

I love that they all have their jealous worries -- and that it's just life, it doesn't ruin them. Too often I've heard that threesomes couldn't possibly work because of jealousy, and this is a lovely demonstration of why that's not necessarily true.

syredronning October 13 2009, 21:08:35 UTC

Thanks a lot for the feedback! I love to think that threesomes could be made to work although I didn't manage so far but it needs exceptional people, afais :)

secretsolitaire October 12 2009, 22:10:47 UTC

Oh, I loved this, even if all three of them broke me a little. *hugs all of them*

syredronning October 13 2009, 21:09:00 UTC

Thank you! I felt like hugging them too.

jlm121 October 12 2009, 22:30:42 UTC

I love this series so damn much. You've captured these remarkable human qualities in each of them and given them incredible presence. That's hard to do in stories.

I loved this section because it's the reality of making this relationship work. The sex is great but each of them brings such baggage to it and their ties are emotionally deep but the physical distance puts a real strain on it.

Did I tell you I loved this? Cause while I am babbling I need to make sure you understand that I do.

syredronning October 13 2009, 21:14:15 UTC

Awww, thank you for the great feedback! So glad you like the series and this part of it, and that they come across as living people :)

izzyfics October 12 2009, 22:41:37 UTC

Love the parallelism here with the jealousy--it worked well in comparing their reactions. Which were awesome, by the way. The emotions and love and allusions to sexytimes... Ah, very nice.

syredronning October 13 2009, 21:17:16 UTC

So glad you like the story! :) Thank you!

celandineb October 12 2009, 23:04:56 UTC

*sigh* I think the phrase "hurts so good" is the one I need to apply here. Very realistic, that they should each have those feelings of exclusion; love is never fully balanced, can't be.

syredronning October 13 2009, 21:19:28 UTC

Thank you for you feedback! I try for realistic so I'm glad it came across like it :)