FIC: Match Point (TeniPuri)

[syranthil]

I'm alive, I promise!

Rather a while ago in the Prince of Tennis timeline, a simple TezuFuji one-shot.  Concrit appreciated, though of course if you just want to heap on the praises, that's fine too... :D  Enjoy...

Match Point
Fandom: Prince of Tennis
Author: Syranthil
Genre: One-Shot, Shounen-Ai
Pairing: Tezuka/Fuji
Rating: PG
Summary:  After episode 36 (

Comments

[ketchupblood]

"I don't get angry at you"

-wibbles badly- Oh my... This was amazing and beautiful. I absolutely loved this. Fuji is so sweet and lovely and Tezuka is... wonderful.

Only little suggestion is that you really don't need to use 'tensai' so much. But otherwise... Amazing.

[syranthil]

Thanks. :D I'm glad you liked it.

Looking over it, I do agree about the 'tensai' thing, but I guess that's what I get for starting it three months ago and finishing it without more than a quick glance through...

[demonessryu]

It's so beautiful. I can only say s much as I've ran out of words...

[syranthil]

Thank you :D

[anjenue]

This was beautiful. I especially loved this: He had been foolish-but he was allowed the space for that, every once in a while. It's so very Fuji.

Thank you for sharing!

[syranthil]

Thanks! Fuji is absolutely my favourite TeniPuri character, so I'm glad I got the essence of Fuji-ness right. :D

[vierblith_tefu]

It was so simply beautiful I wanted to cry. -huggles OTP-

Thanks for sharing!^_^

[syranthil]

OTP love... mine too. :D

You're welcome, and thanks for the comment!

[violeteyedhair]

Tezuka would be angry, because he didn’t understand that Fuji didn’t care who was stronger, and wouldn’t really fight because he didn’t want to know. / Or he could say no, and make Tezuka angry now without the risk of changing what they had. / “No,” Fuji said. It was an easy decision.

I like that. It's good writing.

All of this is good writing. I'm impressed.

[syranthil]

Thank you so much! O_O I'm very glad you enjoyed it.