come and turn me from the light

Aug 30, 2011 17:50

Original piece of writing. I like this one. :)

Title: Finding Wonder
Rating: G
Warnings: None
Original
Notes: For the mini challenge at brigits_flame
Prompt: Bring on the wonder
Wordcount: 290
Summary: She finds wonder in them all.

like spilled gold )

writing: original, synner is creative

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ladyknightanka August 30 2011, 23:19:11 UTC
This is so beautifully, descriptively written - almost poetic. I love the pretty flow of words here. ♥

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synnerxx August 30 2011, 23:20:52 UTC
Hee, thanks! Playing around with a more imagery-based prose kind of style. Glad you enjoyed it, hun. <3

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stharridan August 31 2011, 01:30:00 UTC
Oh, I LOVE this! You brought so much, well, wonder to such simplicity! I'm listening to Forever Young by Audra Mae right now and it seriously fits this little piece! Nice work, hun! ♥

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synnerxx August 31 2011, 01:33:00 UTC
<3 I'm trying out a new style, kind of prose and imagery based. Glad you liked it, hun. <3 I actually was listening to White Angel by Lions when I wrote it, but now I want to play that song and read it again. :D

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frankenshane September 1 2011, 06:51:26 UTC
This was lovely bb. ♥

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synnerxx September 1 2011, 20:56:11 UTC
Thanks. <3

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frankenshane September 1 2011, 22:54:50 UTC
You're most welcome.

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