Gimme Shelter

[synnerxx]

Title: Gimme Shelter
Rating: PG
Fandom: Sons Of Anarchy
Character: None mentioned by name, Clay's first person POV
Warnings: None
Notes: Written for Week One at brigits_flame. SoA fandom, but can be read as original as no specific events or characters are named, just alluded to.
Prompt: Gimme Shelter - Playing For Change

Comments

[leticiae]

It sounds like an intense story. You could feel the adrenline surging in the POV. What did 'they' do to warrant such violent emotions, I wonder.

Ive never heard of this fandom, but it sounds interesting.

[synnerxx]

Thanks! I'm thinking about making a follow-up to this fic, but writing in first person is a little odd for me.

It's very interesting. My new love, lol. :)

[bluegerl]

Hello - The Roaring bluegerl. Ooooer, this is dark indeed. There is a fear here, fear of what is coming, and a tiny hidden little prayer that it won't come...though the person knows its inevitable. His Shelter isn't going to be much good now... its very depressing really. I do hope it won't happen!!!!
The 'righteous' need for vengeance, they did it to us - wse must do it to them... yet he doesn't truly want to.
Its marvellous, though dark and deep. I wish the whoever much luck..!!! Thanks for making the thinking!!!

[synnerxx]

You've given me a new perspective on this piece, thanks! I'm glad you liked it. Been a while since I've written from first person point of view.

Now I have a new idea for a companion piece. Thank you!

[bluegerl]

Oh goody! I hope HE is getting out of it and still giving shelt er or something exciting... Look forward to seeing and reading!

Your Journal header is perfectly marvellous - oh so November... magic.

[synnerxx]

Thanks, hun! :D

I really love it. Thanks. :D

Re: Edit!

[synnerxx]

Thank you for the edits. You made some excellent points. I'll definitely be taking your advice. :)