the promised lambs sex magic smut

[synecdochic]

I'll have you all know I totally killed my word count for the night writing this. But oh, it was so worth it.

I'm not footnoting the Hebrew. It'd take too long. Just mentally insert a whole bunch of Scripture if you don't speak Hebrew. :P

(Also, standard rough draft warning.)

Comments

[aruan]

Every passing moment without more of this? Of sacred words whispered into skin and Lance reaching for the magic inside himself and your beautiful, ethereal prose to weave it all together and make it real enough for even the atheists to believe? An eternity. Thanks for posting this, truly.

[synecdochic]

oh, thank you. thank you; those are good words.

i could probably pontificate for about 20 minutes on the significance of everything Lance says to Justin, but I think I'll just say thank you instead, as it's past my bedtime :)

[aruan]

For what it's worth, whenever you should find the time, I'd love to know.

[trumpeterofdoom]

Oh my.

This was simply wonderful and hot. Mmmmm. I have such a massage kink, and there aren't enough out there as wonderful as this is. Baby, if this is the rough draft, I can't begin to imagine what the final product will be like. :) I want Lance to heal me too!

[synecdochic]

The final product will have far fewer repeated words and I might, y'know, have someone actually check my Hebrew transliteration ;)

I love massage. I've always wondered why more people didn't write about it. a good massage is sometimes better than sex -- or at least more relaxing!

and thank you. i am glad you enjoyed :)

[pthalogreen]

exquisite, love. :) I feel like that, when massaging people. the energy, the warmth, the language of muscles. i don't call it magic.

[synecdochic]

Maybe you should :)

[pthalogreen]

*beams*

*sits behind you and takes your shoulders in my hands*

[claire]

beautiful

[synecdochic]

Thank you :)

[coolwhipdiva]

I am so in love with this universe. Thanks for this slice of it.

[synecdochic]

I so never expected to love this universe so much, nor for others to love it this much either. I'm glad, though. It's so much fun to write, and as long as people are reading, it makes me want to keep going ...

Thank you for letting me know you liked it :)