22 Lost

Nov 30, 2011 10:58

Word Soap: As The World Keeps Turning
Author: SYLnl
Title:  #22 Lost
Rating: PG
Summary:  The ‘honeymoon’ is over
Big Thanks To: ltklo, for plunging into my punctuation
Disclaimers: As far as I know, Seth Snyder was created by Douglas Marland. Thumbs up for that one, Mr. Marland!

His entrance was met with the same enthusiasm as the coffee and Reid smiled. ( Read more... )

lure, word soap, fan fiction, rating: pg, romance, sylnl, atwt, drama, luke/reid

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shar_jere November 30 2011, 15:39:46 UTC
I'm in a daze too wtf just happen.....interesting and it's never good in fics to have an unknown caller OMG did someone kidnap Luke sorry just going along with a soap theme LOL.something is not right..

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shar_jere November 30 2011, 15:42:04 UTC
Ha I think I am over thinking this LOL

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sylnl November 30 2011, 23:14:24 UTC
Hahaha, you're empathizing and I love that! Thanks!

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sylnl November 30 2011, 23:19:32 UTC
hahaha, I can imagine! But your remark brings me comfort, because if you can make it work for all those years, our boys may too! Yay!

I'm married to a talker and I'm one too, but I found plenty of others ways to drive him (a little) nuts. Like writing a soap...:-)

And I think you understand this chapter was no fun to write. I really felt the distance and Reid's frustration about it. But they ARE very different, so this was bound to happen:-)

Thanks for the support and feedback!

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sleeper6 November 30 2011, 19:38:12 UTC
Uh oh, the guys need to talk. But I like a bit of angst with these two so good job!

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sylnl November 30 2011, 23:20:10 UTC
I knew you like:-) Thanks!

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petuniagirl November 30 2011, 20:28:26 UTC
Ooh, intriguing. I wonder who's calling. I'm just catching up on all my reading--the last few chapters have been fantastic. I loved the family dinner scene. I always love it when I read about a warm sense of community/family surrounding the boys.

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sylnl November 30 2011, 23:20:35 UTC
Thank you so much! Always happy to hear from you!

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tldreamer November 30 2011, 23:51:40 UTC
As much as I know the boys need to talk (and I know they will, sooner or later!), I have to comment on Reid hustling Seth into a game of chess!! He just can't resist!!

Now, who is it on the phone????

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sylnl December 1 2011, 09:32:49 UTC
Chess might be Reid's way to feel 'under control'. His anchor, so to speak.

And the answer to your question is in the next chapter:-)))

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