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06 This Whole People Caring about People Business

Nov 11, 2011 10:55

Author: SYLnl
Title: #6 This Whole People Caring about People Business
Rating: G - PG
Warning: Longer than usual, but it had to remain one story
Summary: Reid meets the Snyder clan
Disclaimers: Just checked my mail. No million dollar deal inside and no early Christmas gifts like all the rights to ATWT. Tomorrow could be a different story. Think not.
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lure, word soap, fan fiction, rating: pg, romance, sylnl, atwt, drama, luke/reid

Comments 22

reidsmum November 11 2011, 12:52:54 UTC

Oh Oh Lily, I could strangle her at this moment. Not even for her own son, she wants and wishes real love and happiness. I am so pleased that Reid and Luke stick together.

It's a very moving story.

scotianova November 11 2011, 13:29:00 UTC

It really is a moving story. I kept my breath 'hearing' Lily's verbal assault.
And I'm very curious about all this will turn out!

sylnl November 11 2011, 15:29:17 UTC

Me too:-)))) Thanks!

sylnl November 11 2011, 15:29:05 UTC

Thanks!

everything was so damn prefect until Lilly shar_jere November 11 2011, 13:10:30 UTC

Oh Lilly you never learn do you I guess you choose to learn your lesson the hard way.for God sake Noah is behaving better than you right now grow the hell up.fine if she wants to end up an old lonely bitter woman with 50 cats she is definitely going in that direction right now.

Re: everything was so damn prefect until Lilly sylnl November 11 2011, 15:28:40 UTC

Poor Noelle Beck, just pictured her with cats alllll over her:-))))))

Re: everything was so damn prefect until Lilly shar_jere November 11 2011, 15:45:11 UTC

Muahaha

joann414 November 11 2011, 16:41:56 UTC

Lily is on her broom again, but Emma burned her straw this time. Loved this chapter, and the everyone else's support of Reid.

sylnl November 11 2011, 18:13:50 UTC

Thanks! It felt so good to write about Emma as I see her! And Lily... hmmm... is it very obvious I have ...uhm... some issues with her? :-))))) reading your broom remark made me laugh out loud

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sylnl November 11 2011, 18:14:40 UTC

*blushing* thanks!

ltklo November 11 2011, 17:56:14 UTC

So, so much to like!

Reid gave Noah his famous neutral look
LOL! Indifference is the ultimate put-down :)

Great list, and the idea really worked.
# 9 He had a family

“I know you like them young, but isn’t this taking it a little too far, even for you?”
Too far, Lily! That is WAY over the line. Emma's right not to want that behavior in her house.

The Reid/Emma interactions were terrific. As were Reid/Holden.

I like how you turned around Lily's bad behavior to be a positive endorsement of how much the rest of the family likes Reid and wants him with Luke.

sylnl November 11 2011, 18:22:21 UTC

Thanks!!!
It's so funny, because that whole list thing... it just came out. Most chapters start out as little scenes in my head (like a private ATWT viewing:-))) but the list thing... big surprise! I knew about the diner, about Reid and Holden and even Lily's remark was 'shown', so Reid starting a list threw me off, at first, hahaha. I guess that's typical Reid:-)

But it worked, I agree.

Thanks for the support! I love reading what 'stuck out'