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05 Holy Codependency!

Nov 10, 2011 13:13

Author: SYLnl
Title: #5 Holy Codependency!
Rating: G
Summary: Finding a home turns out not half as complicated as moving out…
Disclaimers: Nope, still not making money with this writing… labour of love, all the way.
Big Thanks To: ltklo, for drilling out my grammatical goof ups

Standing in the kitchen, Luke stared out of the window, trying to wrap ( Read more... )

lure, word soap, fan fiction, romance, sylnl, atwt, rating: g, drama, luke/reid

Comments 15

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sylnl November 10 2011, 17:26:23 UTC

Thanks for this great feedback ( ... )

shar_jere November 10 2011, 16:40:43 UTC

Well I don't like Chris I blame him and the writers for our crappy ending so i really don't care what happen to him but I am really enjoying this keep em coming.you're doing an amazing job!ooh I wonder how you're going to fit Noah into all of this it's going to be epic.:)

sylnl November 10 2011, 17:34:07 UTC

Thanks again for your kind words. But...Noah? Noah who? hahaha. I have some scenes in my head and on of them includes Noah... and I'm dreading the moment I have to put in words, to be honest. I was never a Nuke fan to begin with:-) But let's wait and see who the boys want their story to be told. I'm just their typing slave:-)

shar_jere November 10 2011, 18:02:02 UTC

I never been a fan either in fact after Noah married that girl I stopped watching until Reid came in.Noah should get a award from being the worst boyfriend ever.

sylnl November 10 2011, 23:10:07 UTC

I agree! And I understand why you stopped watching... I was tempted quite some times myself. Never did. And looking back, I'm glad, because who knows...maybe those old storylines will enter the fan faction one way or another. But no Noah. Done with him:-)))

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sleeper6 November 10 2011, 18:26:28 UTC

Wonderfully done! I like that Chris knew he'd been wrong in hiding his condition.

And the Katie/LuRe relationship is so cute!

sylnl November 10 2011, 23:04:30 UTC

Thanks! I'm still not sure if Chris was really taking responsibility or just saying what he knows his father wanted to hear...

petuniagirl November 10 2011, 21:25:21 UTC

This was great! I loved all the little details like Kim still disliking Reid and Katie being happy for Luke and Reid, but still a little sad to see her roommate go.

sylnl November 10 2011, 23:04:53 UTC

Thanks for the feedback!

scotianova November 10 2011, 21:27:44 UTC

I like the whole series!
Reid and Luke acting so naturally around each other!
Luke standing up against his mother - really loved that.

"I don’t want to leave our new bed alone for too long, being it’s his first night with us and all.”

This is so sweet!

sylnl November 10 2011, 23:06:31 UTC

Hahaha, thanks. Our boys make a great team:-)