04 “You Don’t Have a Say in This”

Nov 09, 2011 18:55

Author: SYLnl
Title:  #4 “You Don’t Have a Say in This”
Rating: G
Warnings: mild Lily bashing
Summary: Distractions, distractions, distractions
Disclaimers: Just to be absolutely sure, I did check again, but nope…still don’t own ATWT or their characters.
Big Thanks To:  ltklo, for checking my grammar, so I feel more secure about this ‘writing in English ( Read more... )

lure, word soap, fan fiction, romance, sylnl, atwt, rating: g, drama, luke/reid

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Comments 14

joann414 November 9 2011, 19:05:44 UTC
These little reds are so damn much fun. Thank u

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sylnl November 9 2011, 21:51:09 UTC
I'm SO happy you like them! I still feel a bit unsure about the whole 'writing in English'-business, so feedback like this feels great! Thanks!

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sleeper6 November 9 2011, 19:23:39 UTC
Another good one!

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sylnl November 9 2011, 21:52:01 UTC
Meaning a lot, coming from a brilliant writer as yourself. Thanks!

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shar_jere November 9 2011, 21:29:15 UTC
Lily will never learn I never understood why she always chose Noah over her own son.someone need to teach her a damn lesson.

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sylnl November 9 2011, 21:52:50 UTC
You made me laugh out loud! So I guess you wouldn't mind some mild Lily bashing in the future? :-))))

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shar_jere November 10 2011, 02:11:52 UTC
Who me of course I won't mind :)

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sylnl November 10 2011, 11:04:49 UTC
hehehe:-)))

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posadachick49 November 9 2011, 22:52:40 UTC
Awesome little story. Great job. Loved how Luke stood up to mommy dearest. Ethan is a doll too!!!!!

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sylnl November 10 2011, 00:23:18 UTC
Thanks! I'm enjoying Luke's 'Dr. Oliver approach' very much too!

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sylnl November 10 2011, 11:05:59 UTC
Me too, me too! But there. No he said it:-)

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