Comments | sylnl: 48 Less is more

sylnl

48 Less is more

Jan 19, 2012 12:35

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word soap, katie snyder, fan fiction, !author|artist: sylnl, romance, atwt, luke snyder, henry coleman, drama, rating pg, dr. reid oliver, luke/reid

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tldreamer January 19 2012, 12:45:32 UTC

This was super cute. But I'm getting a little worried that Reid is becoming toothless!

sylnl January 20 2012, 10:46:21 UTC

Reid can handle sweets:-)))))

scotianova January 19 2012, 13:36:12 UTC

-->The "-less" - lines!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Henry watched him with a telling grin. “And here I was, thinking you were the one calling the shots…”

“Common misconception,” Reid assured him. “Can’t even call my soul my own. He took it all. He’s ruthless.”

He ignored Reid’s murmured “I’m so hoping we’re still talking about the cafeteria…”

---> You've said it yourself: PRICELESS!

P:S: Your muse is perfectly working - whereas mine is a bit petulant right now;)

sylnl January 20 2012, 10:48:05 UTC

Thanks for this great feedback!

And don't worry, my muses get petulant too, from time to time. I just let them out anyway and let them do what they need to do... just trust them:-)

kccalgal January 19 2012, 19:40:17 UTC

Your last line summed up this chapter...PRICELESS

Super idea.

sylnl January 20 2012, 10:48:29 UTC

(T)hank(s)!

ltklo January 19 2012, 23:11:57 UTC

You know I go for the Reid/Hank interaction!

sylnl January 20 2012, 10:48:58 UTC

Hahahaha, I do!!! Me too! I had so much fun with this one

csigeekfan January 19 2012, 23:33:27 UTC

Wonderful installment. I love the last word. Priceless.

sylnl January 20 2012, 10:49:22 UTC

Thanks. Yeah, they are, aren't they? Priceless!