Breaking Point: Collision

[sylargrrrl]

At first, the concrete under Mohinder’s bare feet was freezing cold but after he had been in the cell for longer than a few hours -it became as warm as flesh itself. After that initial irritation was gone-there only remained the tube in his nostril, pumping his mind full of chemicals that made it difficult to form a thought let alone articulate one

Comments

[takhallus]

I love your Sylar and his devotion in this, despite Mohinder being his usual difficult self. The scene at the end with Peter is lovely, I know you said you found it hard but you've done a great job.

[wickedpurrz]

This is great, I'm really enjoying this fic. <3

[iluvbsbkevin]

Ah I so love the Mo and Sy and Nathan fun in the beginning... ;)

[mabetini]

Oooo is this was VERY cool!

His boots squeaked against the floor as he moved forward to Suresh, his hand reached out to entangle his fingers into the man’s sopping wet strands.

Um...wet Mohinder? Ys plz! And the plane scene -- shoulda been like that on the show man! I was so hoping Sylar would pop up in the plane on my telly, but you've taken care of that for me! Minus the uh...dead Sylar thing XD But I have faith that you'll save him in later chapters! :D

[eternal_moonie]

WOW! This is great!! Good job!