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Jan 03, 2008 01:21

Title: Define Dangerous
Characters: Sylar, Claire.
Spoilers: Up to Season 2.
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 2848
Chapter: 18/?
Previously: Chapter 1, Chapter 2, Chapter 3, Chapter 4, Chapter 5, Chapter 6, Chapter 7, Chapter 8, Chapter 9, Chapter 10, Chapter 11, Chapter 12, Chapter 13, Chapter 14, Chapter 15, Chapter 16, Chapter 17,
Summary: While ( Read more... )

fic, !multichapter, #rating: pg13, @vampedvixen, !au

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vampedvixen January 6 2008, 05:27:37 UTC
Thanks, Osbourne!

I'm glad someone caught the Grinch reference. :D

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raitheemohugger January 3 2008, 10:53:22 UTC
yay an update!
And I kind of saw this coming, but still. Awesome. And now Sylar has the whole "you saved me" thing going, and Claire will adore him for risking his life to keep her safe...
\o/

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vampedvixen January 6 2008, 05:29:49 UTC
Thanks. I do hope the next chapter is able to surprise you!

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smithsbabe65 January 3 2008, 14:37:30 UTC
I've been following this story from the very beginning, but I've been relunctant to review this until now!

I must tell you that I think that you are a very talented writer! Your descriptive and vivid narrative is spectacular! This chapter alone was a fine example of this! I can't wait until the next update!

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vampedvixen January 6 2008, 05:31:09 UTC
I'm so glad you chimed in here. It's good to know I have readers out there that lurk, because it makes me wonder how many others are out there. hehe.

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cheap_valentine January 5 2008, 00:29:53 UTC
Oh... guh... I love the way you make them together. I really do. And I'm really loving this fic. It's suspenseful and interesting and sort of romantic. Great job xpxp

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vampedvixen January 6 2008, 05:31:30 UTC
hehe.. Thanks, sweetie :)

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cheap_valentine January 6 2008, 00:33:29 UTC
Another thing I love about this chapter is Sylar's inner conflict. He talks about how stupid Claire is for following him around, and he really believes that he isn't right for her, but he can't fight his reflex to protect her. And in the end, who saves who? Claire, who proves to be as wise as she is optimistic, or in Sylar's eyes, foolish. The whole thing is very well-written.

I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!!!!!!!!

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vampedvixen January 6 2008, 05:33:02 UTC
Sylar's so confuzzled. I love his inner conflicts, both in fanfic and on the show. I think that may be why his character is my favorite. More is coming soon.. actually, more is already up. Just posted tonight. Enjoy!

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