FIC: Thus Spoke Zarathustra // Chapter Five : Trick Or Treat Pt.1

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Title: Thus Spake Zarathustra: Chapter Five : Trick or Treat Pt.1 (Post #2)
Characters/Pairing: Sylar/Claire
Summary: Master or Husband? Sylar's coming to the slow realization he really can't have both.
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Women as property. Kinks are voyeurism (camera), whips, canes, domination, chains, piercing, semi-predicament bondage

Comments

[cabela_787]

Sorry, I’ve been meaning to come back and comment. It makes my day when you update.

I don’t think you are, but I hope you do not do the back in time thing. Or least not permanently (it might be interesting to see it for a little while, but then go back to the real timeline) or maybe it’s a way to end the story (not that I want this story to end, I would love it went on forever :)). I just feel when stories do things like that (unless it’s the premise of the story of course) undermines what the piece has done so far.

I do agree with what 1bill_sookie said about Luke; that would be an interesting scenario. But I don’t see Sylar killing Luke as there’s a connection between them, but who knows where you are taking Luke. Just have to wait and see.

I feel odd that everyone seems to want more Molly and I don’t. I like seeing her in small doses and I do like the idea that a commenter mentioned about seeing her thoughts on Sylar and his relationship with Claire. I guess I would rather see more Claire/Luke interaction than Luke and Molly because one- Claire is not use to being around people other than Sylar and Molly and two- I wonder how she would act around someone very similar to Sylar (but someone I would guess to be more brutal in a way because he doesn’t have Sylar’s class, charisma and practice) that she does not have a past with or know and therefore doesn’t have that fear of. But to each his own, but like I said I feel like I’m missing something in regards to Molly.

I love the talking and hearing their internal dialogue. It’s so interesting. This chapter was amazing and I just can’t get enough.

Hope you update soon. Thanks!