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Nov 18, 2009 06:28

So I'm writing a Sylaire piece for Nanowrimo and have finished my story. Good news! Bad news is I'm about twelve thousand words short ( Read more... )

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anonymous November 18 2009, 13:12:15 UTC
One thing I've always wanted in a "Claire goes back in time fic" is Sylar's reaction to her changing the past or trying to change the past. Rarely do we ever see Sylar, as we know him, in these fics; sure we see Gabriel and if the time travel fails (as in Hymenchan's epic one-shot) we see Sylar at the end, but never during or before...I can never make my mind up if Sylar would be angry that Claire would want to change the past, would he try to stop her, or would he encourage her to save himself? Guess it might depend on his mood, he's a bit mercurial isn't he?

No need to credit if you use, these are just random thoughts anyways (I don't even have an LJ, so it doesn't matter).

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preosmo November 19 2009, 10:43:45 UTC
You know, that's a fantastic idea. Perhaps I'll put in the points where present-day Sylar is sitting there, getting all these memories.

Also, Can I have a link to that one-shot you mentioned? *bats eyelashes*

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anonymous November 19 2009, 13:20:22 UTC
Sure, no problem. Here's the link (sorry you'll have to copy and paste): http://community.livejournal.com/unendingstories/899.html#cutid1

Its honestly one of my favorite stories. Enjoy :)

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raitheemohugger November 18 2009, 13:19:55 UTC
I definitely like the idea of having warring Sylars at some point, even if they never interact. Just, you know, Claire dealing with both.

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preosmo November 19 2009, 10:44:22 UTC
I'm intrigued but how do you mean? Like Claire's trying to grasp the concept of Gabriel and Sylar being the same person?

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raitheemohugger November 19 2009, 13:42:16 UTC
I meant perhaps the Sylar we know coming back in time at some point to talk to Claire...idk

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preosmo November 19 2009, 14:04:26 UTC
Ooh, I can see him finding them (his Gabriel!self and her) in a compromising position and being 'WTF IS THIS?' Fantastic!

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