FIC : Listening [R]; Part of Revelations 22

[redhillbones]

Title: Listening [SEVEN]
Characters/pairings: Sylar/Claire
Summary: Sylar's true motivations start coming to light.
Rating: R, to be safe.
Warnings: Kink is sensory deprivation
Notes: ~4500 words. This chapter has no sex (I know, gasp!) and a lot of dialogue. It feels a little exposition-y to me but Sylar monologues far too much in canon not to

Comments

[anonymous]

I think I can see what you are trying to do with this chapter - trying explain his behavour but again maybe it's a testament to all you've written before. I still want him punished . I don't even feel any sympathy for him - I just think he is even crazier. It's like he has lost touch with reality completey and I hope Claire see's it too. Even though this chapter has no violence it's possibly the most horrific because you can just see how unhinged he really is! I'm still hoping that you let her get revenge some how - I don't even thinks it needs to be physicals. She needs to mentally break him down with what she says. Lol I've never had such a strong dislike to a character before - well done!

[h0pefulregret]

Yet again, it's another fabulous addition to an already wonderful fic! I really like this part, too, since you get to see more into Sylar's mindset. I think it's important so, while he can remain the villain, people can at least hear his motivation from his own mouth - so to speak.

Thank you, for this, and I can't wait for the next part! ♥

[roqi]

I loooove this series.♥ It's so disturbing and dark and twisted. Not to mention it's written incredibly well. Looking forward to more from you!

[filmchickjen]

Woot!! Another great chapter! I didn't even mind there wasn't sex ;)

[anonymous]

Wow... after this I just don't know what to think... on one hand he should pay for all this madness but on the other hand he's been hurt betrayed in so many ways that my heart just cry's out to him... (but then again I do love bad boy's...lol)I hope she mentally breaks him though... #evil Smirk#