Claire's Got a Gun

Dec 05, 2008 00:15

Title: Claire’s Got a Gun
Rating: R
Summary: Claire had always trusted her hero. Now, to her, he’s a villain like all the rest. Tonight, he’ll pay for turning her into a victim and a new hero will rise.
Spoilers: Up to 3x07
Disclaimer; Heroes is not owned by me, but by Tim Kring. I’m simply borrowing these characters for non-profit entertainment.
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xsadlittlesmile December 5 2008, 05:53:54 UTC
Amazing, but so sad at the same time :'(

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josiefier December 5 2008, 20:19:06 UTC
Thanks... sorry it made you sad though...

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electrifiedpie December 5 2008, 09:09:50 UTC
i loved how sylar was always so caring worried about her and there for her but i didnt like how u wrote peter too much but it was still very awesomely written and an awesome fic i liked it hehe

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josiefier December 5 2008, 20:19:42 UTC
Eh, I knew you'd hate that part - hence why I warned you in advance and made you listen to the song lol. Thanks though :)

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electrifiedpie December 5 2008, 21:20:57 UTC
its ok lol u know if u did have peter do that then i guess we wouldnt have seen the caring side of sylar for his beloved claire so it was still awesomnesssssssssss

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cameroncrazed December 5 2008, 12:52:36 UTC
I was thinking oh, poor Claire for most of the fic, but then I changed my mind - poor Noah. He doesn't have a clue about why she had to change, why he had to lock her up.

Love the dynamic between Sylar and Claire in this one, how he recognizes that it's his turn to be the hero, how he needs to step back and let her do it.

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josiefier December 5 2008, 20:26:03 UTC
Thanks :) Yeah, Claire finishing it herself was a pretty big deal to me. Not just because of the song, but also that she had to learn how to do it sooner or later - and wouldn't be able to if she went running to "Daddy" every time

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josiefier December 5 2008, 20:26:23 UTC
Thanks :)

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elliesmeow December 7 2008, 00:41:10 UTC
Rock on. That was great. I'm glad that Sylar let it be Claire that made Peter pay for his crime.

-Ellie

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josiefier December 7 2008, 00:58:02 UTC
Thank you! Yeah, there would've been no way for her to really even try to get beyond it in my mind if she hadn't gotten personal closure with it

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elliesmeow December 7 2008, 01:08:27 UTC
Agreed.

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