Comments | sylar_claire: Equilateral

cameroncrazed in sylar_claire

Equilateral - 1

Mar 31, 2008 22:53

As he holds his hands over his ears in a futile attempt to block out the woman’s terrified screams, Sylar promises himself that the first thing he’s going to do if he ever manages to escape from this hell is to kill Bob Bishop. The second thing he’ll do is track down the team that had managed to grab him, but Bob Bishop’s death is his number one ( Read more... )

fic, !multichapter, #rating: r, pairing: sylar/maya/claire, !drama, @cameroncrazed

Comments 22

tju_tju_tju_tju April 1 2008, 03:20:59 UTC

This is excellent! This is really interesting and I'm very intrigued by it so far. I like their dynamics, and the terrible, horrifying situation that they're all in. Can't wait for the next chapter!

cameroncrazed April 1 2008, 12:04:06 UTC

Yay! I'm glad you like it, and thank you for commenting :) I struggled trying to make sure the dynamics were just right, so I'm glad to hear that it's working :)

karanina April 1 2008, 07:57:33 UTC

LOLZZZZ!!!! Claire and Maya having catfights! Oh that's brilliant!

I love it!

Can't wait for part 2!

cameroncrazed April 1 2008, 12:06:21 UTC

Hi :) I can't imagine that there's any way Claire would be able to get along with Maya without there being a catfight or two :) At least I didn't write a scene where they're pulling each other's hair, lol.

Part 2 should be up tonight, but I can't guarantee that since it's still being written. I've never written a true threesome before, so it's taking a bit longer than I'd anticipated.

sigh_lar April 1 2008, 19:02:17 UTC

Loving this so far, hoping for some very mean guards to be torn apart and maybe for some smut. Best part though, my name's in there! Thus prompting my first ever entry/comment on LJ - I only joined to read certain people's locked stories!!

cameroncrazed April 1 2008, 19:33:25 UTC

Hi :) Thank you so much for commenting - it really means a lot to me that you picked this one to comment for :)

There will be smut, oh yes.

albion1919 April 2 2008, 00:06:45 UTC

By the way, what I said was that I’m not surprised he shot you, you’re really annoying. I probably would have, only sooner.

Damn that's heartless :x

I like the more subdued portrayal of Sylar, he's been worn down by the years but it's still him. The situation certainly is interesting and I'm wondering how Maya will fit into this threesome, as she'd be more likely to stab him that have sex, lol.

cameroncrazed April 2 2008, 00:27:54 UTC

The subdued Sylar was exactly what I was going for! Our typical Sylar might emerge at one or two points in chapter 2.

And who says that stabbing and sex can't mix? Wait, on second glance, that reads/sounds far dirtier than I intended. (Also, she doesn't exactly have anything there to stab him with :) )

albion1919 April 2 2008, 00:37:22 UTC

Guh, ima imagining it... :x

lol! I didn't mean literally, I mean emotionally she rightly hates him so having consensual sex would be a rather tricky feat for him to accomplish ;)

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cameroncrazed April 2 2008, 01:02:29 UTC

Do you want to know a secret?

I hate Maya. I really do. I cheered when I thought she was dead on the show.

Why am I writing this? I have no clue, but you're right, somehow the addition of Claire makes it work :) Actually, what I posted wasn't what I'd originally written. This started as a pure Claire/Sylar story - just the two of them and the guards, and honestly, it was awful. Something was missing - and it turned out to be Maya.

I'm glad you're able to enjoy the fic (even with Maya it it).