Comments | sylar_claire: Seduction of the Senses

cameroncrazed in sylar_claire

Seduction of the Senses - 12

Feb 18, 2008 19:52

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A/N: Unbeta’d. Remember when I said that the series was going to get really dark and show Sylar doing what Sylar does best? Yeah, we’re at that stage. I’m so sorry. Darkity dark dark dark. Don’t say I didn’t warn you.

Sylar can hear someone knocking on the door, but he doesn’t really care. He can ( Read more... )

fic, !multichapter, #rating: r, @cameroncrazed, !au

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cameroncrazed February 19 2008, 01:50:07 UTC

Thanks! :) I'm trying to keep Sylar as in character as I can, well, except for being a bit more bat-sh*t insane, which just adds up to more evil and twisted than usual. I'm so glad you're liking evil!Sylar.

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cameroncrazed February 19 2008, 02:00:57 UTC

Gee, I never would have guessed, lol :)

anonymous February 19 2008, 01:55:34 UTC

OH-MY-GOD!!!!! Darkity dark indeed!

This was fucked up-twisted and I loved every word! Can I just ask one question: is wrong to root for the bad guy? Take that West! R.I.P. as in rest in pieces!

That bit about the 12th rose dipped in blood was fucking CRAZY! And so, so good! The Shakespearean-like verses on the calling card were also a nice creepy touch! And God why I am afraid to find out what's in that last box...?

Oh Claire, you don't know what you've done...

If you don't update and soon there'll be a special delivery waiting on your doorstep from you-know-who!

cameroncrazed February 19 2008, 02:00:20 UTC

Like I said, I wasn't kidding about the darkity dark dark aspects. This one took so long to write because I was having issues getting into the dark fucked-up twisted mindset - not my usual state of mind, for sure. Go ahead and root for the bad guy, I sure am :) I've been waiting to use the blood-soaked rose for awhile - it's just so perfectly Sylar :) The comment about RIP - that's what's in the final box. I'm thinking it might be what's left of his head, but I'm scared to open the box to find out. The next update should be quicker than this one, I don't have to go to quite as dark a place to write it.

Thanks so much for commenting!

smithsbabe65 February 19 2008, 02:02:32 UTC

Sorry girl, I'm the one that left you the anonymous comment *smiles sheepishly* I forgot to sign in before I sent it!

Anyway...great chapter! This was Sylar at his best and you've done a top-notch job of capturing his evil essence.

And I meant what said, update or face the consequences....MUWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!

cameroncrazed February 19 2008, 02:06:05 UTC

Hi! :) I just figured I'd scared someone so badly they didn't want me to find them, lol. What exactly are the consequences? You mentioned a box from Sylar, but didn't specify if I was getting the tasty chocolates, the creepy flowers, or random body parts. Can I request the chocolate, please? :D

smithsbabe65 February 19 2008, 02:10:35 UTC

I don't know...Sylar is torn between sweets and severed appendages.

Wait...what's that Sy? You've come up with the perfect solution?

Please, do tell? *GASP* Damn, baby, you're a sick fuck!

Well, I hope you like body parts dipped in Belgian chocolate, 'cause that's what he's sending you. Bon appetite!

cameroncrazed February 19 2008, 02:13:18 UTC

Is it dark chocolate? Yummmm, dark chocolate *drools*

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cameroncrazed February 19 2008, 03:26:16 UTC

Yay! Glad you like it! :) Thanks for commenting, it really does mean a lot to me :)

I'm NOT a West fan. I actually am more sympathetic to West in this story than I usually am, but he still had to die. I needed a man in her life, one that she could be romantically linked to, so that Sylar could kill him to make his point, and West just has more impact than any OC I could create.

There will be more, I promise. Chapter 13 focuses on Sylar's mind games, and I'm really enjoying playing with this one :) That, and another (familiar) character enters the scene... :)

cheap_valentine February 19 2008, 04:21:50 UTC

creepy!Sylar owns my brain. I wonder how Claire is going to react when she finds out that they're going to get married.

Also, nice continuity with the roses. And I'm still amazed at how you can juggle two fics at once.

Here's to hoping both get updated soon!

cameroncrazed February 19 2008, 12:32:15 UTC

She sorta kinda knows, he said it in the Florida house but she was starting to freak out by that point, but Sylar's serious about this. I've got really detailed notes for all the series, so it's not too difficult to keep plot in mind - it's finding the time to write that's the hard part.

There will be more - soon. Very soon. Maybe tonight or tomorrow morning soon.

I'm so glad you're still liking this one :)