Seduction of the Senses - 7

[cameroncrazed]

When he paints again, the subject matter surprises him. It’s not the usual scene that he’s become accustomed to; instead, the Bennet family graces his canvas. Noah, Sandra, Claire, Lyle, and that ball of fluff Sandra insists is a dog are vividly painted, and are standing in front of a hotel sign. His telephone floats into his hand, and

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[cameroncrazed]

Thanks! :) I LOVES creepy!Sylar now that I've gotten used to writing him like that :) Yeah, this is the set-up chapter for the Sylaire goodness coming up next.

[minorarcana]

I love how you write in present tense - I haven't been able to find anyone else who does it. For awhile I thought I was the only one.

Fantastic closing line.

[cameroncrazed]

I started doing writing in present tense, almost like a challenge - can I do it and keep it up?, when I joined sylar_claire, and I just love it. I used to be past tense only, but everything seems more vivid and active like this. Glad you like it :)

[raitheemohugger]

This chapter is basically my karmic birthday gift. ^.^
Seriously, tres awesome. Can't wait for more. OH THE SUSPENSE.

[cheap_valentine]

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*HAPPY BIRTHDAY*

[cheap_valentine]

damn that cake turned out ugly :( I sorry!

[cameroncrazed]

Happy birthday! And, mmmm, cake :)

[cameroncrazed]

I love him for everything, but just keep in mind that you said you love evil!Sylar. I may be able to change your mind about that in the next few chapters. Next one should be good, at least I hope it is :)

[cheap_valentine]

OMG A PURPLE MUUMUU

*dies laughing*

[cameroncrazed]

I was wondering when someone was going to comment on the muumuu :) Please don't die :)