Comments | sylaire_chall: The Coming Storm

cameroncrazed in sylaire_chall

The Coming Storm

Feb 22, 2009 21:41

Title: The Coming Storm
Author: cameroncrazed
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 3445
Spoilers: none
Note: Thanks so much to ladyanne525 for betaing - I really appreciate it!
Disclaimer: “Heroes”, it’s concepts and characters do not belong to me.

Written for challenge #10: lightning at sylaire_chall.

( It's going to be another July scorcher, folks, with no end... )

challenge #10

Comments 24

clairethehero February 23 2009, 03:41:24 UTC

that is the most amazing story I have ever read...Great Job.

cameroncrazed February 23 2009, 23:53:05 UTC

Thank you so much! :)

clairethehero February 24 2009, 01:38:25 UTC

no prob its the truth btw when r we starting our roleplay?????

josiefier February 23 2009, 04:04:31 UTC

He's staying! Yay! lol I love Annabel - still wanting a baby brother... and looks like she's getting one :D Love it :)

cameroncrazed February 23 2009, 23:54:08 UTC

Thanks! :) So glad you like the fic, and Annabel too - I'm always worried to introduce OCs, but I had to for this one.

raitheemohugger February 23 2009, 04:22:17 UTC

I just want to tell you that this is epic.
:D
^ That's my face. Right now.
It was just...and then...and...but...it's....
Wonderfully realistic future Sylaire, eloquently written, perfectly executed.
In short, you are made of awesome tonight.
<3

raitheemohugger February 23 2009, 12:54:22 UTC

And I just read it AGAIN because it is so incredibly awesome.
Did you mean to imply that basically the entire town is Claire's family? That's what I was feeling. Just curious. I mean, after 300 years in a town that small...lol

cameroncrazed February 23 2009, 23:56:02 UTC

The entire town's not genetically related to Claire; there's got to be some outsiders just to prevent inbreeding (although, they are partially Petrelli... hmmm) :)

cameroncrazed February 23 2009, 23:54:30 UTC

Yay! Glad you like :)

mamozombie February 23 2009, 07:31:27 UTC

This is one of the most beautiful Sylaire stories I've ever read.

cameroncrazed February 23 2009, 23:56:19 UTC

Thank you so much. :)

smithsbabe65 February 23 2009, 14:51:56 UTC

This was lovely...absolutely lovely.

Truly a stunning piece of work, epic in scope and yet with that warm homey feel that I can't get enough of.

I got the distinct impression that the town, as small as it was, was comprised wholly of Sylar and Claire's descendents.

And I loved how portrayed Sylar. He is this force of nature that wrecks havoc on the town and in Claire's heart.

Loved the ending. I cheered out loud when he finally decided to stop running and settle down with Claire.

In a word: beautiful!

cameroncrazed February 23 2009, 23:57:55 UTC

:) Your reviews always make me smile so much :) Most of the town's related - although some are by blood, and some just by marriage. I love this version of Sylar too, but I couldn't let it end without him coming home. So glad you like! :)