.033 Too Much

Oct 20, 2005 14:59

.033 Too Much
Sydney Alexis
Companion Piece for A Simple Thing

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qaf fic, angst, 100

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trouble2urh3art October 22 2005, 04:01:27 UTC
he wanted to wear the evidence of what he'd done. What his actions made occur

The whole blood stained scarf around him was a bit creepy to me. When i first watched the ep, i did'nt even notice it. The scene where Michael was standing outside the room watching him remove it. At first i was like, what is that, then i rewound it for a second time and realized it was the bloody scarf. I felt it was kinda gross at first, but after watching it a few times i thought it was kinda romantic in a dark, creepy way.

I wish youre description was part of the original story line, it would have rocked.

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sydneyalexis October 22 2005, 05:37:16 UTC
I wish youre description was part of the original story line, it would have rocked.

Sadly that's the difference between a man and a woman writing something; we emote things a lot better. We take the time to 'flesh' ideas and characters out.

And, yeah, it was a little creepy, but I also thought that it was profoundly sad.

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