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sydneyalexis

[Fic] Little Ears

Sep 11, 2005 17:45

Little Ears
Sydney Alexis

Gus sat on the floor next to his Daddy’s coffee table, pudgy little fingers wrapped around his Captain Astro pencil as he practiced making ‘M’s on his big chief tablet . His tongue darted out in concentration the same way that Justin’s did when he was drawing. His Dad called it ‘the zone.’ Gus wasn’t sure what that meant ( Read more... )

qaf fic, angst, humor, ficlet, 100

Comments 12

zosha2003 September 12 2005, 01:07:40 UTC

Jeez this is so sweet! I love it and sincerely hope you write more.

sydneyalexis September 12 2005, 07:07:20 UTC

Thank you.

And I'm working on writing more. :D

taylorjustin September 12 2005, 01:45:32 UTC

I adored this!

“Did I say somethin’ wrong? Mom always tells me I shouldn’t repeat what people say ‘cause it’s rude, but Nana Deb always says ‘if you say it in front of little ears, it’s bound to be repeated.” ROFL

sydneyalexis September 12 2005, 07:07:54 UTC

Thank you. :D

and_the_damned September 12 2005, 07:18:29 UTC

Very, very sweet and charming. And powerful too.

sydneyalexis September 12 2005, 07:49:24 UTC

Thank you. :D

trouble2urh3art September 12 2005, 15:22:56 UTC

“Daddy? Do you want me to go practice letters in Uncle Ted’s office? I can if you need me to. It’s kinda fun ‘cause every time I move something on his desk he gets this look on his face. Sorta like Uncle Mikey when I turn the pages in his comic books too fast.

lol...Damn Michael and his comic books, i love how you have Gus interact with all the characters.

“Of course I can. You know…all kinds of important words start with 'M's. Mortgage, mutual funds…”

HAHAAHAHAHAH..this was so funny, ted does'nt have the slightest clue how to interact with a kid.

i loved it.

sydneyalexis September 12 2005, 20:29:57 UTC

i love how you have Gus interact with all the characters.

Having Gus interact with all of the characters actually makes it easier for me to get into each of their heads. Reason? People typically let their guards down when they're around kids.

ted does'nt have the slightest clue how to interact with a kid.

I've always had such a soft spot for Ted. His level of loser-ness reminds me of myself in high school...only I was less pathetic. LOL!

i loved it.

Thank you muchly.

And the prompt? That one is *so* awesome-o. And I *totally* know what I'm going to write.

*squees like a fangirl*

trouble2urh3art September 12 2005, 21:11:50 UTC

lol, glad you liked it. Cant wait to see what you come up with.

trouble2urh3art September 12 2005, 15:42:25 UTC

BTW, if your up for another prompt..i have one for you. that is if you have the time.

Jennifer/Craig..a woman's worth. (got it from alicia keys cd, i love her and her music)