Never been one for Romance

Mar 25, 2010 04:20

Never been one for Romance

Pairing: KangTeuk
Rating: G
Genre: Romance
Word Count: 170
Disclaimer: Don't own...
Summary: Of men and bells...

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fandom: super junior, pairing: kangteuk

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sycoraxsnow March 25 2010, 04:23:11 UTC
SPOT FOR FEATHERIE

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featherie March 25 2010, 11:57:08 UTC
ASJDKFKF SO SO HAPPY. 8DDDD

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featherie March 25 2010, 12:10:05 UTC
THIS IS SO, I'M SO, AHHH THIS IS SO - I AM SPEECHLESS ♥

He’s never been one for romance and never believed in love at first sight.
So at first I was like, .__. it's going to be one of those kind of fics, when this guy doesn't believe in love and then finds someone and falls head over heels, like, totally cliched.

But then I read this; He’s neither stunned nor blown away and it isn't cliched any longer. :3 AND WEDDING BELLS? THAT'S SO UNEXPECTED AND 8DD ♥ Really, I love how you introduce the idea of bells ringing in Teuk's head like it's normal, even though we all know it isn't. >> And also, you wrote it so that I didn't think it was the sound of wedding bells at first, I simply thought Teuk was near a church, which is good, I think. Because it's better to add the wedding bell part in at the ending and make everyone surprised. \o/ Am I making sense or just rambling and assuming you understand what I mean?

The man looks surprised, looks vaguely attractive and introduces himself as Youngwoon.LOL SURPRISED INDEED ( ... )

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sycoraxsnow March 25 2010, 17:17:19 UTC
ahah well ok ( ... )

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featherie March 25 2010, 22:29:53 UTC
In a way, this is kinda cliche but it's okay. :3 Fluffy Kangteuk always is accepted, anyway. As long as isn't the rot-your-teeth kind of fluff.
Ah, your explanation points out some hidden meanings I didn't see while reading this, although I still think that different people can intepret entirely different things about a story, which is sort of like you and me. Basically we analyze it in a different manner, but come up with the same satisfactory ending. \o/

No, you shouldn't. Writing confusing things is your writing style, changing it would be unnatural. :/ Keep writing bb, strive forward. :D

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featherie March 25 2010, 22:32:31 UTC
OH AND YES. A POSSIBLE PROLOGUE PLZKTHX. 8D

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sycoraxsnow March 26 2010, 01:12:48 UTC
uh i'm sounding rude...i hate how voice tones don't transfer through written text *is stupid* XD

Ah but...idk XD I wrote that half-jokingly...
Would be a nice series though i guess XD ~ I'll try?
Have to finish MM and Angel's Face first through...have to, have to...*chants*

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dimpledteuk March 26 2010, 07:59:47 UTC
That's what you have emoticons for. XD

It would be a nice series, there are just so many possible roads you could bring this fic down, but I don't want to stress you.

Don't feel like you have to finish it, it's only fun if you want to. :D

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sycoraxsnow March 25 2010, 23:33:13 UTC
well haha, idk, i think it's cliche in a sense that it kinda IS romantic but their reactions aren't that cliche XD
plus I guess it's almost like a parody...XD i have no idea what I'm talking about but it makes sense in my head XD

idk...personally i don't think it's confusing - if people bothered to read and think in parallel and didn't expect to be spoon fed quite so much...
When I don't understand something in a fic I start researching it, or re reading it and paying more attention, playing around with ideas, etc~ I think I'm stupid instead of telling the author it's confusing...
but that's not being humble and not treating people as equals.

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dimpledteuk March 26 2010, 07:57:35 UTC
I was trying to stress that fact in my second comment. .__. I suppose it's because I can't really express myself well using words? I can't express myself well at all, actually. :/

Haha personally, if the author doesn't make the hidden meaning obvious enough, people tend to skip over it and not come to terms with the real meaning. Really, this drabble generally isn't confusing; it's only the small details like further amplified by the acoustics of his head and yet the chime is presistentpersistent and he knows where he’s heard it before… and the bells resound only in his head, but the man smiles and he’s lost for words plus a few more I'm too lazy to type in that, if you look more closely at it, may make it seem confusing. XD

And also, I was using my iPod when I read this, so researching was out of the question, there's only so much you do using an iPod. ): And it was 12am in the morning, lmfao.It's not really about spoon feeding, rather, it depends on how people interpret what they read. They might interpret it in what seems to be ( ... )

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dimpledteuk March 26 2010, 08:01:28 UTC
Oh God I made the same mistake again. .___. I'm featherie btw. XD I keep forgetting to log out of my rp account and sign into my personall acc when I comment here.

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sycoraxsnow March 26 2010, 08:24:07 UTC
haha i know it'a ok XD I realized the first time ( ... )

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featherie March 26 2010, 23:09:46 UTC
Ah I should've guessed. xD Well, it really makes us think. Rofl what are to doing up at 5am?! Shouldn't you be sle - 'kay well, I wake up at five am every morning, so it's only understandable. xD

Lmao, don't force yourself. :) Your muse will come back...hopefully.

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